Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が不明瞭で文法ミスが多いです。まずは直接質問に対する明確なトピック文（肯定・否定）を一文で示し、その後簡潔な理由や具体例を付け加えて下さい。接続詞（because, but, however など）を使って文をつなぎ、過去形や現在完了（have been）などの時制を正しく使う練習をしましょう。文は最大5文に収め、冗長な表現や不必要な語は避けてください。例："No, I don't really enjoy taking photos of different views because I prefer to remember a scene mentally rather than photographing it. For example, when I travel I focus on experiencing the atmosphere rather than taking pictures."

예시: No, I don't really enjoy taking pictures of different views because I prefer to remember scenes with my own eyes. For example, when I visit a new city I like to focus on the atmosphere and sounds rather than trying to photograph everything.

제안: 文法と語彙の選択に問題があります（"bills"や"amber"は不適切）。まず簡潔に好みを示すトピック文を作り、その理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べてください。比較をするときは正しい構文（"I prefer X to Y"や"X is more ... than Y"）を使い、関連する語彙（buildings, countryside, scenery, peaceful）を用いましょう。接続語（because, although）で論理性を保ってください。

예시: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is usually quieter and more relaxing. For example, rolling hills and wide fields feel more peaceful than crowded streets and tall buildings.

제안: 回答は断片的で時制や語順が不正確です。まず明確に“自国”か“外国”のどちらが好みかを述べ、その理由を具体的に述べてください。過去の経験を述べる場合は正しい現在完了や過去形（"I have been to" または "I have never been to"）を使い、混乱を避けるために文章を整理して話してください。不要な野暮なつなぎ言葉（uhなど）は避け、最大5文以内で答えましょう。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I know many beautiful places there and feel more connected to them. Although I have visited some other countries, I still think the landscapes at home are more familiar and special to me.

× No, I don't. I've ever been to. But I like seeing no different views.

✓ No, I don't. I have never been to (travel to many places). But I like seeing different views.

The original contains fragments and incorrect use of 'ever'. 'I've ever been to' is ungrammatical here; use 'I have never been to' to express not having been. 'seeing no different views' is incorrect negative; use 'seeing different views' or 'not seeing different views' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use complete sentences and correct negative forms, e.g. 'I have never been to other countries, but I like seeing different views.'

× I prefer bills in urban areas because. Views in amber other areas is more beautiful than that of rural areas.

✓ I prefer buildings in urban areas because views in some other areas are more beautiful than those in rural areas.

Several problems: 'bills' is wrong word; likely 'buildings'. A sentence fragment 'because.' lacks a clause. 'amber' seems a typo for 'some'. Subject-verb agreement: 'Views ... is' should be 'views ... are'. Comparison 'that of rural areas' is awkward; use 'those in rural areas'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and complete the 'because' clause, ensure plural agreement and correct comparative reference.

× I prefer bus in my country because I've ever been to other countries except for China and. Uh, my country is beautiful.

✓ I prefer buses in my country because I have never been to other countries except China. My country is beautiful.

Problems include wrong noun form 'bus' (should be 'buses' or 'travel by bus' depending on meaning), incorrect use of 'I've ever been to' (should be 'I have never been to' to express lack of experience), and sentence fragment 'except for China and.' which is incomplete. Suggestion: use 'have never been to other countries except China' or 'I have been to other countries, but not China' depending on intended meaning; keep sentences complete and use correct plural forms.