Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (remove redundant words, fix article/capitalization errors). Aim for 2–3 sentences, and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., scenic spots, coastlines).

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, in my hometown I often photograph scenic spots such as beaches, tall mountains and rivers, because their colors and shapes change dramatically with the light.

제안: Provide a clear direct answer first and avoid vague words like "mode"; use linking words to contrast reasons. Fix grammar and be specific about what you like in each setting (e.g., vibrant city skylines, peaceful countryside). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer both depending on my mood. When I want excitement I enjoy urban views like busy streets and skyline lights, but when I want peace I prefer rural landscapes with quiet fields and forests.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repetition; correct grammar and unclear phrasing. Give one specific reason for preferring your country and one for appreciating views abroad, using linking words for coherence. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because the Philippines offers diverse landscapes like beaches and mountains that I know well. However, I also enjoy seeing views abroad to experience different cultures and architecture.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because especially those natural resources here in our hometown, There are a lot of tourist spots here, like our beaches, our huge mountains.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially of the natural resources in our hometown. There are a lot of tourist spots here, such as our beaches and our huge mountains.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'because especially' and misuses a comma and capital 'There' mid-sentence, causing a run-on and unclear conjunction use. Split into two sentences and use 'especially of' to link 'taking pictures' with 'natural resources'. Use 'such as' to give examples and join noun phrases correctly. Suggestion: Separate independent ideas into clear sentences and use appropriate linking words like 'especially of' and 'such as' to present examples.

× Well, I prefer both, but it depends upon my mode.

✓ Well, I prefer both, but it depends on my mood.

The phrase 'depends upon' is acceptable but 'mode' is the wrong word; the intended word is 'mood' (emotional state). Use the preposition 'on' with 'depends' for natural usage: 'depends on'. Suggestion: Use 'depends on my mood' to express that preference changes with feelings or situation.

× Sometimes I like in a noisy places, but I also value solitude, so sometimes in rural areas there's no.

✓ Sometimes I like noisy places, but I also value solitude, so sometimes in rural areas there is none.

'in a noisy places' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'places' — choose singular or plural. Better: 'like noisy places' (general statement). The clause 'there's no' is informal and incomplete; expand to 'there is none' to refer to 'noise' or 'people'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article usage. Suggestion: Remove the extra article before plural nouns and make the reference clear ('none' refers to noise or people).

× Well, I love my country, but I also love to have views on other countries.

✓ Well, I love my country, but I also love to see views in other countries.

The preposition 'on' with 'views' is unnatural here. Use 'see views in' or 'view other countries' to express visiting or observing scenery in other countries. Also 'love to have views on other countries' is awkward; 'see views in other countries' matches the speaking context. Suggestion: Use verbs like 'see' or 'view' with 'in' to indicate experiencing scenery in other countries.

× We are there are here in the Philippines.

✓ We are here in the Philippines.

The phrase repeats 'are' and mixes 'there' and 'here', creating an ungrammatical redundancy. Choose the correct demonstrative 'here' to indicate location and remove the extra words. Suggestion: Use concise structure 'We are here in the Philippines' to state location.

× There are a lot to offer.

✓ There is a lot to offer.

After 'there are' the grammatical subject is 'a lot' which is treated as singular meaning 'a large amount'. Therefore use 'there is a lot to offer.' If referring to 'many things', rephrase 'There are many things to offer.' Suggestion: Use 'There is a lot to offer' or 'There are many attractions to offer' depending on intended meaning.