Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar (infinitive forms) and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words. Keep it concise (max 4-5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially at sunset. I find the warm light and colours make landscapes look more dramatic, so I often photograph beaches or city skylines at that time. After taking pictures, I usually send a few favourite shots to my friends on Snapchat.

제안: Use correct noun forms and article usage, and add a linking word to compare clearly. State preference, give specific reasons and an example to support it. Avoid repeating the main point.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because the scenery is more natural and peaceful. For example, I like photographing rolling hills and quiet lakes, where there is less traffic and noise. In contrast, urban views often feel crowded and cluttered.

제안: Make sentences grammatically correct and clearer. Start with a direct statement of preference, then explain why using specific details and linking words. Express feelings with accurate phrasing and avoid awkward collocations like "nice view schedule".

예시: I prefer the views in my own country because I know the best spots and times for sunsets and sunrises. For instance, I often go to the coast at sunset where the colours are spectacular, and seeing that scene always makes me feel happy and grateful.

× 'Yes, I love to taking pictures of different views, especially in the evening in the sunset because there is a nice view of a sunset.'

✓ 'Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially in the evening at sunset because there is a nice view.'

'to' + verb should be followed by base form (infinitive). The phrase "love to taking" is incorrect; use either "love to take" or more naturally "love taking". "in the sunset" is awkward; use "at sunset". Also "a nice view of a sunset" is redundant with "sunset" repeated, so simplifying to "a nice view" is clearer.'

× 'I always prefer to taking pictures and sending a snap on the Snapchat to my friends that view.'

✓ 'I always prefer taking pictures and sending snaps on Snapchat to my friends to show them the view.'

'prefer to taking' is incorrect; use "prefer taking" or "prefer to take". "sending a snap on the Snapchat" is wordy; use "sending snaps on Snapchat". "that view" is not the correct phrase to indicate showing; use "to show them the view".'

× 'I prefer nice view in the rural area because there is a natural and clear view.'

✓ 'I prefer nice views in rural areas because there are natural and clear views.'

'view' should be plural when speaking generally about multiple scenes: "views." Similarly, "the rural area" is too specific; use "rural areas" for general preference. Subject and verb must agree: plural subject "views" takes "are." Alternatively, keep singular consistently: "I prefer a nice view in the rural area because there is a natural and clear view." but plural is more natural here.'

× 'In contrast, in the urban area there is a lot of crowd and traffic due to the transports.'

✓ 'In contrast, in urban areas there is a lot of crowding and traffic because of public transport.'

'in the urban area' should be plural general "in urban areas." "a lot of crowd" is incorrect collocation; use "a lot of crowding" or "many people." "due to the transports" is unidiomatic; use "because of public transport" or "because of traffic and public transport." '

× 'I prefer rural area.'

✓ 'I prefer rural areas.'

'rural area' should be plural when expressing a general preference: "rural areas."

× 'In my country there is a nice view schedule like sunset and sunrise.'

✓ 'In my country there is a nice sequence of views at sunset and sunrise.'

'There is' is acceptable but "nice view schedule" is incorrect collocation. Use "sequence of views" or "scenery at sunset and sunrise." Also use "at sunset and sunrise" rather than using "schedule." '

× 'I prefer in my own country I always click pictures in sunset and it feel make me happiest and grateful when I see sunset.'

✓ 'I prefer my own country; I always take pictures at sunset, and it makes me feel happiest and grateful when I see the sunset.'

'prefer in my own country' is awkward; say "I prefer my own country." "click pictures" is informal; "take pictures" is standard. Use "at sunset." "it feel make me happiest" has multiple errors: subject-verb agreement and verb forms. Use "it makes me feel happiest and grateful." Also add "the" before "sunset."'