Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear personal statement (topic sentence), then add 1–2 brief supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and coastal landscapes because they capture contrasting light and atmosphere. I usually carry a small camera when I travel, so I can record interesting scenes as I find them.

제안: Your reply again repeats the question and contains unclear words likely due to pronunciation or transcription errors. Answer directly with your preference, give a reason and an example using a linking word (for example, because, so, such as). Keep sentences natural and avoid redundancy.

예시: I prefer rural views because I find nature more peaceful and visually varied. For instance, rolling hills and forests offer changing colors and textures that I like to photograph, whereas urban scenes can sometimes feel crowded.

제안: Again you repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. State your preference clearly, support it with a reason or brief example, and use linking words to connect ideas. Use varied but appropriate vocabulary and limit to a few sentences.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to different landscapes and cultures. For example, I enjoyed photographing coastal cliffs abroad that are very different from the beaches at home, which helps me learn new composition techniques.

× Do you prefer views in an urban phrase or real Aries?

✓ Do you prefer views in an urban area or rural area?

The student mispronounced/spelled 'area' as 'phrase' and 'rural' as 'real Aries', producing nonsense phrases. This is not a tense or agreement error but a word choice/spelling error. Correct words are 'urban area' and 'rural area' to match the examiner's question. Suggestion: listen to the examiner's words, practice pronunciation of 'area' /ˈɛəriə/ and 'rural' /ˈrʊərəl/ or /ˈrʊrəl/, and proofread responses when writing.