Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and communicates ideas clearly, but you made a few minor errors and could be more concise. Improve by correcting word choice and small grammar mistakes (e.g., 'lighting' not 'lightning'), and reduce redundancy by combining similar ideas. Use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details with linking words.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. Taking photos helps me preserve special memories and notice small details I might forget, and I also like experimenting with different angles and lighting to create more interesting images.

제안: Your answer attempts to explain a preference, but contains grammatical errors and a confusing idea (urban areas being 'closer to nature' conflicts with common sense). Clarify your main point with a correct topic sentence, fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, pronouns), and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect reasons.

예시: I prefer urban views because the city skyline and parks offer varied scenes. For example, I enjoy walking along tree-lined streets and riverside paths, which help me relax and reduce stress.

제안: The answer is incomplete and contains pauses and punctuation errors. Provide a full, coherent response: state your preference, give a clear reason, and add a specific example. Avoid sentence fragments and unnecessary pauses. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with its landscapes and culture. For example, I love the coastal scenery near my hometown, where the sunsets and cliffs are particularly beautiful.

× In addition to that, I also like to experiment with different angles and lightning to get a beautiful picture.

✓ In addition to that, I also like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get a beautiful picture.

The word 'lightning' refers to atmospheric electrical discharge; the correct word for illumination or light effects in photography is 'lighting' (spelling/vocabulary). This is a word-choice error rather than grammar; replace 'lightning' with 'lighting'. No tense or agreement change is needed. Suggestion: Learn commonly confused words and check spelling related to photography terms.

× I prefer views in urban areas because it more closer to nature.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they are closer to nature.

The original sentence uses 'it' (singular) to refer to 'views in urban areas' (plural) and 'more closer' is ungrammatical (double comparative). This is a subject-verb agreement and comparative error. Use the plural pronoun 'they' and the correct comparative 'closer' (not 'more closer'). Suggestion: Ensure pronouns match the number of their antecedents and avoid redundant comparatives like 'more closer'.

× Other than that I also feel that it's make me more calm and helps me to release my stress.

✓ Other than that, I also feel that it makes me calmer and helps me relieve my stress.

There are multiple issues: 'it's make' mixes contraction 'it's' (it is) with a bare verb 'make' — subject-verb agreement requires 'it makes'. 'More calm' is acceptable but 'calmer' is the correct comparative adjective form. 'Helps me to release my stress' is not wrong but 'helps me relieve my stress' is more natural and concise in English. Overall this is subject-verb agreement and adjective use. Suggestion: Match subjects and verbs (use 'makes' for 'it'), use standard comparative forms ('calmer'), and prefer concise verb patterns ('help someone do something' rather than 'help someone to do something').

× I prefer views in my country because I never travel to other countries.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I have never traveled to other countries.

The original uses simple present 'never travel' to express a past experience up to now; in English, present perfect ('have never traveled') is appropriate to indicate life experience. Also 'travel' may be spelled in American English as 'traveled' or British 'travelled' — choose one consistently. This is a tense issue (present perfect) and article is fine. Suggestion: Use present perfect to describe experiences up to the present: 'I have never been to other countries' or 'have never traveled to other countries'.

× In addition to that, I. Think my country has good views because.

✓ In addition to that, I think my country has good views because it has a variety of landscapes and places to visit.

The original is fragmented and contains incorrect punctuation ('I. Think') and an unfinished sentence ending with 'because.' This is a sentence structure and punctuation error. Complete the thought by giving a reason; correct the misplaced period and write it as a single sentence. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; ensure sentences are complete with subject, verb, and a complete predicate. Provide the reason after 'because'.