Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 応答は肯定的で内容は分かるが、文法ミス（'to taking' や冗長な表現）があり、情報が限定的です。改善点：1) 文法を正し、動詞の形を使う（'to take'、'also' の位置に注意）。2) トピック文の後に1〜2文で具体的な詳細を加える（どのような景色を撮るか、どの機会に撮るかなど）。3) 接続詞（for example, because）を使い論理を明確にする。例文の長さは最大5文に抑える。

예시: Yes, I do. I often go to Mount Taco with my father to take landscape photos because the sunrise there looks spectacular. For example, I like capturing the mist over the valley and the warm colors of the sky. These photos are great for my personal gallery.

제안: 答えは意図が見えるが、論理の展開が不十分で繰り返しがある（'because I can go' は曖昧）。改善点：1) 直接的なトピック文で答える（'I prefer...'）。2) 具体的な理由を2つほど挙げ、それぞれを接続詞でつなぐ（'because'、'and'、'for example'）。3) 冗長なフレーズを避け、文法と語順を整える。

예시: I prefer urban views because they offer more variety and convenience. For example, downtown areas have interesting architecture and vibrant street life, and I can easily visit cafés and shops with my friends. This makes urban scenes more appealing to photograph.

제안: 回答は不完全で文法と語順が大きく乱れています（'I prefer. Own country builds' や未完の文）。改善点：1) 明確な主文で始める（'I prefer views in my own country.'）。2) 理由を具体的に述べる（どんな場所が好きか、例を挙げる）。3) 文を完結させ、接続語で補足説明を加える。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because Japan has many beautiful and varied landscapes. For instance, I enjoy the contrast between tranquil temples, coastal scenery, and mountainous regions like Mount Taco. These familiar places also have cultural meanings that make them special to me.

× I like to taking pictures at Mount Taco.

✓ I like taking pictures at Mount Taco.

The verb 'like' is followed by either the base form with 'to' (to like to do) or the gerund without 'to' (like doing). Using 'to taking' mixes forms and is incorrect. Remove 'to' when using the gerund: 'like taking'. Suggestion: Use 'I like to take' or 'I like taking' depending on emphasis.

× I feel urban areas are very convenient because I can go.

✓ I feel urban areas are very convenient because I can go there.

The sentence is missing the adverbial destination 'there', which makes 'can go' incomplete. Add 'there' to indicate location: 'can go there.' This fixes sentence completeness rather than verb form; however, subject-verb agreement is fine. Suggestion: include necessary adverbial phrases for clarity.

× Well, I prefer. Own country builds because I think Japan has a lot of beautiful places, especially I like to.

✓ Well, I prefer my own country because I think Japan has a lot of beautiful places, and I especially like visiting them.

Multiple structural issues: 'I prefer.' is a fragment; 'Own country builds' is ungrammatical (wrong word order and word choice); 'especially I like to' is incomplete. Reorder and supply missing words: 'I prefer my own country' completes the comparison; replace 'builds' with no need, and add 'visiting them' to complete 'like'. Suggestion: state the preference fully and use a gerund or a full clause after 'especially' (e.g., 'especially visiting them').