Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear opinion, add one or two brief supporting details, and keep it natural and concise (maximum 5 sentences). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' when giving reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and nearby park landscapes in the morning to capture different light and moods.

제안: You repeated the question instead of giving your preference. Improve by stating your preference in the first sentence and then adding one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words such as 'because' or 'however'. Keep responses natural and concise.

예시: I prefer rural views because I like open spaces and natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and lakes since they feel peaceful and offer varied compositions.

제안: Again, you repeated the examiner's question. Answer directly with a clear preference and support it with a specific reason or short example. Use linking words like 'because', 'however', or 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

예시: I generally prefer views in other countries because traveling exposes me to different cultures and landscapes. For example, I loved the coastal cliffs I photographed abroad last year, which were very different from scenery at home.

× Do you like taking picture of different views?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the verb phrase 'taking pictures of different views' refers to multiple instances or the general activity of photographing various views. Use the plural for countable nouns when talking about more than one or a general activity involving multiple items. Suggestion: Use 'pictures' when referring to multiple photos or the general activity of photography.

× Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

No correction needed. Both 'urban areas' and 'rural areas' are correctly plural and appropriate for comparing preferences between types of places. Keep as is.

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

No correction needed. The sentence correctly uses singular 'your own country' to refer to the respondent's country and plural 'other countries' to refer to multiple foreign countries. Keep as is.