Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct topic sentence that answers and adds a detail or reason. Instead of a short yes, expand to 2–4 sentences that explain what kinds of views you like and why. Use linking words (for example, because/so) and specific vocabulary (landscape, architecture, light, composition).

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural landscapes. For example, I like photographing mountains and rivers because the changing light and textures make each shot unique. I often wait for early morning or late afternoon light to capture strong colors and shadows.

제안: Respond directly to the choice (urban or rural) with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting reasons and a linking word. Avoid asking the examiner to repeat your question. Keep it concise and relevant. Use vocabulary like skyline, street scenes, countryside, tranquility.

예시: I prefer rural views because I enjoy wide open spaces and natural scenery. For instance, country fields and forests feel calmer than busy streets, and they offer more varied textures and colors to photograph.

제안: State a clear preference (own country or other countries) and explain why, with a specific detail or example. Use linking words like because or although to connect ideas. Mention cultural or landscape differences if relevant. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I like discovering different cultures and architectures. For example, historic European streets or Asian temples offer unique patterns and colors that I don't see at home, which makes my photos more interesting.

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I do.

The student used an incomplete response 'Yes, I like.' after being asked 'Do you like taking pictures of different views?' In English, short answers to yes/no questions require an auxiliary verb if the main question uses 'do'. The correct short response is 'Yes, I do.' This fixes the sentence structure by including the auxiliary verb. Suggestion: Use 'Yes, I do.' or a full sentence 'Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.'

× Yes, I prefer. How about? How about how?

✓ I prefer urban areas. How about you?

The student answered 'Yes, I prefer.' to the question 'Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?' which is incomplete because 'prefer' requires an object (what is preferred). Additionally, 'How about? How about how?' is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected response supplies the object 'urban areas' and uses the correct follow-up question 'How about you?' Suggestion: Always include the object after 'prefer' (for example, 'I prefer urban areas') and use 'How about you?' to ask for the other person's preference.

× Yes, I prefer.

✓ I prefer views in other countries.

The student replied 'Yes, I prefer.' to 'Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?' This is incomplete because 'prefer' needs an object specifying which option is preferred. The corrected sentence explicitly states the preference 'views in other countries.' Suggestion: Complete 'prefer' with the thing being preferred, for example 'I prefer views in my own country' or 'I prefer views in other countries.'