Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然流畅并避免语法错误。把主题句说清楚并用一两句具体细节支持，例如拍摄的场景、使用的设备或拍照的目的。注意单复数和介词用法（e.g. "in different places"而不是"in different place"），并尽量不重复表达（例如避免同时说"whenever I travel"和"in my daily life"没有衔接）。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I travel I often photograph landscapes like coastlines and mountains, and I also capture interesting scenes in my daily life using my phone to remember moments and practice composition.

제안: 答案结构基本合理，但表达需更自然和准确。主句后用连词或因果表达细节（如"because"后补充具体原因），并注意冠词和复数（"in the countryside"，"rivers"或"a river"）。可以加入一两句对比说明城市景观的不足以增强说服力。

예시: I prefer rural views because the countryside has mountains, rivers and wide fields that make me feel relaxed. Compared with busy city streets, these natural landscapes are quieter and help me recharge.

제안: 回答有逻辑但语言不准确且不够具体。避免词汇错误（不要说"prefer using my own country"），改为"prefer the views in my own country"，并补充具体原因和例子（例如与童年记忆有关、想探索未开发的地方）。句子应更连贯，使用连接词（because, so）正确连结原因与愿望。

예시: I prefer the views in my own country because they are tied to my childhood memories and there are still many places I haven't explored. For example, I want to visit rural villages and hidden waterfalls that remind me of family trips when I was young.

× In different place or I saw the good scenery in my daily life.

✓ In different places or I see good scenery in my daily life.

原句中的 place 應為複數 places，因為說話者指的是不同的地方，且與「不同地方或我在日常生活中看到好風景」並列時，動詞時態需與語境一致。建議將動詞 see 用現在時（或視語境改為過去時 saw），並把形容詞與名詞搭配改為 good scenery 或 better phrasing 如 "nice scenery"。

× Personally, I prefer views in rural areas because in countryside I can see the mountains, river and the fields.

✓ Personally, I prefer views in rural areas because in the countryside I can see the mountains, rivers and fields.

介詞搭配錯誤：應使用定冠詞 the countryside，而非單獨使用 countryside。此外，與可數名詞 mountain, river, field 並列時應改為複數形式 mountains, rivers, fields。也可去掉定冠詞於複數名詞前（the mountains, rivers and fields 或 mountains, rivers and fields），但對 countryside 前通常加 the。

× These sceneries can let me feel refreshed and relaxing.

✓ These scenes make me feel refreshed and relaxed.

scenery 為集合名詞，通常不用複數 sceneries；改用 scenes 或保持 scenery。動詞搭配上用 make sb. feel ... 更自然；形容詞選用 relaxed 描述人的感受，而非 relaxing（relaxing 用來描述事物）。因此改為 "These scenes make me feel refreshed and relaxed."。

× I prefer using my own country, it connects with my childhood and many views are not explored yet, so I want to.

✓ I prefer my own country; it is connected with my childhood and many places there are not explored yet, so I want to.

偏好表達不應用 prefer 使用動名詞短語 here: 更自然說 I prefer my own country。connect with 用法上可改為 is connected with 或 relates to my childhood。原句中 many views 用法不當，應改為 many places 或 many sights。最後的 so I want to 缺少不定語或動詞補語，應明確表達想做什麼（例如 "so I want to visit them" 或 "so I want to explore them"）。