Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用更自然、直接的句子回答，避免语法错误和冗余，并给出简短的原因或例子来支持观点。可以把句子控制在最多 5 句内，使用连接词（如 because, so, however）来保持连贯。注意名词和动词形式（e.g. take pictures, photography skills）。

예시: Not really. I don't enjoy taking photos because my photography skills are quite poor compared with my friends. For example, my pictures often come out blurred, so I prefer to admire views without taking photos.

제안: 回答要直接、语法正确并提供具体理由或细节。避免重复词语（e.g. long long）和口头禅（e.g. umm）。如果说偏好城市或乡村，说明原因并用连接词（because, so, therefore）组织句子。

예시: I prefer urban views. Having lived in Hong Kong for many years, I'm used to the skyline and bustling streets, so I find cityscapes more interesting and familiar than rural landscapes.

제안: 回答要完整并提供具体细节來支持你的偏好。注意时态和动词形式（e.g. I travelled to Italy two months ago）。避免不完整的结尾，使用连接词（for example, because, such as）来丰富内容。

예시: I prefer views in other countries, especially Italy. I travelled to Italy two months ago and loved the historic architecture and picturesque countryside, for example the narrow cobbled streets and colorful buildings in small towns.

× No, I don't like any taking pictures of style or photograph activities at all 'cause my skills of photography is really terrible by others people common.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures or doing photography at all because my photography skills are really terrible compared to other people.

句子中有多处问题。原句的“any taking pictures of style or photograph activities” 用词混乱，不合语法；“any”与后面的动名词短语搭配不当。应改为“taking pictures or doing photography”。“by others people common” 语序和表达错误，正确表达为“compared to other people”。此外缩写‘cause不正式，应写because。建议：使用清晰的名词或动名词短语（taking pictures / doing photography），比较时用“compared to”或“than”，避免口语缩写于正式语境。

× I prefer the fields in urban area more than the areas that you just mentioned cause I've been living in Hong Kong for a long long time and everything I just umm effect by Hong Kong views.

✓ I prefer the countryside less than urban areas because I've been living in Hong Kong for a long time and everything I see is affected by Hong Kong's views.

原句预置介词和短语使用错误。“in urban area” 应为“in urban areas”或“in the urban area”；“prefer the fields in urban area more than the areas” 语义混乱，比较对象不清。后半句“everything I just umm effect by Hong Kong views” 中“effect”用错，正确应为被动或被动意义的“is affected by”，并需要“see”或其他动词来表示“看到的一切”。建议：注意可数名词单复数（areas），使用正确的介词短语（in urban areas / in the countryside），比较时保持明确对比对象，并用被动结构“be affected by”表示受影响。

× Actually I prefer the fields in other countries like especially Italy. I've been travel Italy, uh, two months ago and I like the architecture or.

✓ Actually I prefer the countryside in other countries, especially Italy. I travelled to Italy two months ago, and I liked the architecture.

句中动词时态和形式错误。“I've been travel Italy, two months ago” 混用了现在完成与一般过去时，且动词形式错误，应为“travelled to Italy two months ago” 使用一般过去时表示明确过去时间点。第一句“prefer the fields” 表达不自然，改为“prefer the countryside”。最后“and I like the architecture” 若指过去经历应为“liked the architecture”。建议：有明确过去时间（two months ago）时使用一般过去时；动词后接地点用“travelled to”；调整名词用法使表达自然。