Views— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
수험생
I like taking picture in different places, but speech I especially enjoy photographing my family. I also take the photos whenever I see a beautiful or amazing few so I can remember the moment later.
시험관
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
수험생
Uh, I prefer the rural areas because, uh, it is a very, uh, attractive, uh, and you will get a very happy when you see the view of urban rural areas. So that I would like, uh, to, to, to say it is better to, to perform, it's better.
시험관
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
수험생
I prefer my own country because it is have a landscape and very beautiful places to visit it. So I like my country mountainous because when you go to the mountainous you will see very beautiful view.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
점수: 58.0제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what kinds of views you like and why). Also correct word choice (picture → pictures, speech → especially, few → view) and reduce hesitations.
예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, but I especially like photographing my family. For example, I often take landscape shots when I travel to capture sunsets or mountain panoramas, so I can remember the moment later.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
점수: 35.0제안: Reduce hesitations and give a clear reason with specific details. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then add one or two concrete reasons using linking words (because, for example, and). Avoid vague phrases and repetition.
예시: I prefer rural views because they are calmer and more scenic. For example, I enjoy wide fields and forests where I can hear birds and take peaceful photos, which helps me relax and capture unique landscapes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
점수: 50.0제안: Be grammatically accurate and specific. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give specific examples or comparisons. Use linking words (because, for example) and correct collocations (have landscapes, mountainous areas) to make your answer clearer.
예시: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes and many beautiful places. For example, our mountainous regions offer stunning panoramas and clear hiking trails, so I often visit them to take photographs and enjoy nature.
문법
× I like taking picture in different places, but speech I especially enjoy photographing my family.
✓ I like taking pictures in different places, but especially I enjoy photographing my family.
Incorrect or missing articles and plural noun: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to taking photos in general. Also 'speech' is incorrect word here; likely meant 'especially'. Reorder 'especially I enjoy' to sound natural. Suggestion: use 'pictures' for general activities and place 'especially' before the clause.'
× I also take the photos whenever I see a beautiful or amazing few so I can remember the moment later.
✓ I also take photos whenever I see a beautiful or amazing view so I can remember the moment later.
Wrong word choice and article use: 'few' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'view'. 'the photos' can be simplified to 'photos' for general action. Use 'a beautiful or amazing view' for a single instance. Suggestion: replace 'few' with 'view' and remove unnecessary 'the'.'},{
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