Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için tam cümleler kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve neden Sultanahmet özel olduğunu kısaca açıklayın. Ayrıca zaman ifadeleri veya sıklık belirten kelimeler ekleyerek cevabınızı zenginleştirin. Örneğin, neden fotoğraf çekmeyi sevdiğinizi ve farklı ülkelere neden gittiğinizi belirtin.

예시: Yes, I do. My favourite place is Sultanahmet in Istanbul because it has historic architecture and beautiful light at sunset. I also travel to other countries sometimes to capture diverse landscapes and cultures, which keeps my photography fresh and inspiring.

제안: Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla birleştirin, ve tercih nedeninizi açıkça belirtin. Kısa, net bir konu cümlesi kurduktan sonra ‘because’ veya ‘however’ gibi bağlaçlarla destekleyici ayrıntı verin. Ayrıca noktalama ve cümle yapısına dikkat edin.

예시: Generally, I prefer urban views because I enjoy photographing architecture and busy street scenes. However, I also appreciate rural landscapes for their tranquillity, so I don't mind shooting in the countryside when I want a different mood.

제안: Daha kesin bir konu cümlesi kurun ve tercih nedeninizi spesifik örneklerle destekleyin. ‘If I have to’ gibi ifadeleri azaltıp yerine net bir tercih ve bunun sebeplerini verin. Ayrıca cümlenizi iki kısa cümleye bölerek daha akıcı yapın.

예시: It's hard to choose, but if I had to I would prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the locations and can capture them in different seasons. For example, Istanbul's historic skyline offers unique photo opportunities that I know how to frame well.

× I love taking pictures and also I go to different countries for taking pictures because taking picture is my.

✓ I love taking pictures and I also travel to different countries to take pictures because taking pictures are my passion.

The student used incorrect verb forms and missing nouns. 'Go to different countries for taking pictures' is awkward; use 'travel to different countries to take pictures' (infinitive to express purpose). 'taking picture is my' is incomplete and ungrammatical; provide a noun 'passion'. Also 'taking pictures are my passion' matches plural noun 'pictures'. Suggestion: use infinitive for purpose and complete the noun phrase. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Generally I prefer views in urban areas, but there is no important thing because I love. Watching views and taking pictures. So no need to be in urban or rural areas.

✓ Generally I prefer views in urban areas, but it is not important because I love watching views and taking pictures, so it does not need to be exclusively urban or rural.

The original has sentence fragments ('I love.' 'Watching views...') and awkward phrasing ('there is no important thing'). Recast as a single coherent sentence. Use 'it is not important' instead of 'there is no important thing' and avoid sentence fragments. Suggestion: combine clauses, remove periods that break sentences, and use 'exclusively' to clarify meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I don't know because I love all the views. Also I love my country and traveling other countries so it is hard to choose but if I have to I prefer views in my own country because everywhere is special.

✓ I don't know because I love all kinds of views. I also love my country and traveling to other countries, so it is hard to choose, but if I have to, I prefer views in my own country because everywhere is special.

Missing preposition 'to' with 'traveling to other countries' and awkward noun phrase 'all the views' is better as 'all kinds of views'. Add commas for clarity and 'if I have to' needs commas. Suggestion: include necessary prepositions and use clearer noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I love taking pictures and also I go to different countries for taking pictures because taking picture is my.

✓ I love taking pictures and I also travel to different countries to take pictures because taking pictures are my passion.

Missing article and noun completion: 'taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' and needs a noun 'passion'. Use plural 'pictures' consistently. Suggestion: ensure noun forms and articles are correct and complete expressions. Grammar problem type ID:22