Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ama dağınık ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun, gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve detay verirken net bağlantı ifadeleri kullanın. Örneğin, "I enjoy photographing different views, especially at Sultan Ahmed in Istanbul" gibi başlayın. Ardından neden sevdiğinizi (tarihi mimari, ışık, atmosfer gibi) ve ne tür fotoğraflar çektiğinizi kısa destekleyici cümlelerle belirtin. Ayrıca belirsiz ifadeleri ("my special sports", "and also there are so") düzeltin veya çıkarın.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing Sultan Ahmed in Istanbul because of its historic architecture and dramatic lighting. For example, I often capture wide shots of the mosque at sunset and close-ups of ornate tile patterns, which highlight its atmosphere.

제안: Cevap kısa ve tek kelimeyle ifade edilmiş bir sebep var; daha spesifik ve doğal bir açıklama ekleyin. "Nostalgic" kelimesini destekleyecek örnekler verin (örneğin eski binalar, sokak yaşamı, kafeler) ve bağlaç kullanarak neden kırsal alanları tercih etmediğinizi kısaca belirtin.

예시: I prefer urban views because I find old streets and historic buildings very nostalgic. For instance, I enjoy photographing narrow lanes and traditional cafés that remind me of the city's past, whereas rural scenes feel quieter and less connected to daily life.

제안: Cevap samimi fakat belirsiz ve biraz tekrarlı. Daha yapılandırılmış bir yanıt verin: bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, sonra neden iki seçeneği de sevdiğinizi açıklayan iki kısa destekleyici cümle ekleyin ve tercihinizi geçici veya duruma bağlı olarak belirtin. Böylece konuşma daha akıcı ve spesifik olur.

예시: It's hard to choose because I appreciate views both at home and abroad. At home, I enjoy familiar cultural details and seasonal changes, while abroad I like discovering different architecture and landscapes. So depending on the trip, I often seek out unique views everywhere I go.

× Especially I go to Sultan Ahmed because this is my favorite spot in Istanbul and I take my special sports in there.

✓ Especially I go to Sultanahmet because this is my favorite spot in Istanbul and I take my special photos there.

The sentence has incorrect preposition usage and word choice. 'Sultan Ahmed' is commonly written 'Sultanahmet' and 'in there' is redundant; use 'there'. 'Take my special sports' is incorrect collocation; likely intended 'special photos'. Also word order is awkward: 'Especially I go to...' is better as 'I especially go to...'. Suggestion: reorder to 'I especially go to Sultanahmet because it is my favorite spot in Istanbul, and I take my special photos there.' This improves preposition and noun choice and natural word order.

× I take some pictures and also there are so.

✓ I take some pictures and I also take many photos of the area.

The original sentence 'and also there are so' is incomplete and ungrammatical (sentence structure error). 'There are so' lacks an object or complement. The correction provides a complete sentence with clear subject and verb. Suggestion: always ensure each clause has a subject and verb and a clear object when needed.

× I prefer views in urban areas because they are so nostalgic.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they feel nostalgic to me.

Using 'so nostalgic' is informal and vague; 'feel nostalgic to me' is clearer. The issue concerns inappropriate use of adverb/adjective combination and natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'feel nostalgic' or 'evoke nostalgia' to express the sentiment more naturally.

× Choosing for this question is too difficult because I love my country and other countries.

✓ Choosing an answer to this question is too difficult because I love my country and other countries.

'Choosing for this question' is not idiomatic; use 'Choosing an answer to this question' or 'Choosing for this question' is incorrect prepositional use. This is a verb usage/structure issue. Suggestion: use 'choosing an answer' or 'making a choice' and include the object 'an answer'.

× I love travel, so I prefer all views in the world.

✓ I love travelling, so I prefer all the views around the world.

'I love travel' is acceptable in some contexts but 'I love travelling' (gerund) is more natural. 'All views in the world' needs the definite article 'the' and 'around the world' is more idiomatic. Suggestion: use 'I love travelling' or 'I love to travel' and include 'the' before 'views' and use 'around the world' for natural phrasing.