Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, tense) and avoid repetitive phrases like “I see from my eyes.” Use vocabulary relevant to photography and feelings (e.g. ‘memories’, ‘atmosphere’, ‘dramatic light’).

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me capture memories. For example, I often photograph sunrises and sunsets for their dramatic light, and I also like cloudy or rainy scenes because they create a moody atmosphere.

제안: Answer directly, then give a clear reason and one specific detail. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g. ‘people in a group’, ‘rural areas have such views’). Use linking words (because, for example, also) to make your response coherent and avoid unrelated information about safety unless it directly answers the preference question.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they tend to offer more natural views like wide fields and clear sunsets. For example, I like visiting Kotna in the countryside, and I often go there with friends because it feels peaceful and safe.

제안: Give a concise direct answer, then support with specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid repetition (‘in my country’ repeated). Use linking words (for example, such as) and correct article use (e.g. ‘the beaches’, ‘the mountains’). Mention one or two distinct examples and why you prefer them.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, Goa has beautiful beaches and Kashmir has stunning mountains, so I can enjoy both coastal and alpine scenery without travelling abroad.

× Yes, I like to take picture of different views because we make a memory and usually I like to take a pictures like sunset, sunrise or some cloudy weather is there or rainy season because it's Remember Me that I see through my eyes.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views because we make memories, and usually I like taking pictures of sunsets, sunrises, cloudy weather, or the rainy season because they remind me of what I see with my eyes.

Errors: incorrect use of infinitive/gerund and singular/plural (Types 8 and 1). 'Take picture' should be 'take pictures' (plural). 'Make a memory' should be 'make memories' or 'create a memory'. After 'like' when referring to activities, use the -ing form: 'like taking pictures' rather than 'like to take a pictures'. Also use plural for 'sunsets/sunrises' and correct phrase order: 'they remind me' instead of 'it's Remember Me'. Suggestion: use gerunds for habitual activities and match singular/plural nouns to context.

× This is very beautiful view that I see from my eyes.

✓ This is a very beautiful view that I see with my eyes.

Error: incorrect preposition/pronoun use (Type 12 and 11). 'See from my eyes' is unnatural; standard English uses 'see with my eyes'. Also include the indefinite article 'a' before 'very beautiful view'. Suggestion: use 'a' for singular countable nouns and 'see with my eyes' to indicate perception.

× Usually I think that in rural areas are having that kind of places like Sunset I talk about Kotna that is in rural area.

✓ Usually I think that rural areas have those kinds of places, for example Kotna, which is in a rural area.

Errors: awkward sentence structure and subject-verb placement (Type 26) and plural agreement (Type 1). 'In rural areas are having' is incorrect; use subject 'rural areas' + verb 'have'. Use 'those kinds of places' for plural. Clarify example by using commas and a relative clause. Suggestion: place subject before verb and use 'have' for possession.

× So yeah, I prefer to go rural area if I have a peoples in Group because safety matters first.

✓ So yeah, I prefer to go to rural areas if I have people with me in a group because safety matters most.

Errors: incorrect quantifier/pronoun use and prepositions (Types 14, 12, 11). 'Go rural area' should be 'go to rural areas'; 'peoples' is incorrect plural — use 'people'; 'in Group' should be 'in a group' or 'with me in a group'. Also use 'most' instead of 'first' for emphasis. Suggestion: use correct plural forms and include necessary prepositions/articles.

× Definitely in my country because in my country there is a lot of places there is awesome views like mountains or beaches.

✓ Definitely in my country because there are a lot of places with awesome views, like mountains or beaches.

Error: 'there is' used with plural noun (Type 3 and 27). Use 'there are' for plural 'places' and restructure: 'places with awesome views.' Suggestion: match 'there is/there are' to the number of the noun and place modifiers after the noun.

× Goa is famous for beach and Kashmir is also famous for mountains.

✓ Goa is famous for its beaches, and Kashmir is also famous for its mountains.

Errors: article and pluralization (Type 22 and 1). Use possessive 'its' and plural 'beaches'/'mountains' to refer generally. Also add conjunction punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: use 'its' when talking about characteristic features of a place and plural nouns for general categories.

× There is a lot of cities there. There is a very famous for their views so definitely.

✓ There are a lot of cities there that are famous for their views, so definitely I would choose my country.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and sentence fragment (Types 27 and 23/26). 'There is a lot of cities' should be 'There are a lot of cities'. The second sentence is incomplete and awkward; combine into a complete sentence and add a clear concluding statement. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid sentence fragments by providing a clear subject and verb.