Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more direct and concise with one clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundant phrases like "I couldn't resist myself" and "astonishing view of the nature."

예시: Yes, I do. As a nature lover, I often photograph scenic spots when I travel because they capture unique light and colors. For example, last autumn I photographed a valley at sunrise, and the warm light on the mist created a memorable image.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer (urban or rural), then give one linked reason and a brief specific example. Correct grammar and avoid awkward phrasing like "tougher the views" and "more beautiful than compared to."

예시: I prefer rural views. I find the lush greenery and open landscapes more appealing because they feel peaceful and varied; for instance, I enjoy photographs of rice terraces and forests more than shots of concrete high-rises.

제안: Give a direct statement first, then support it with a specific reason and one brief example. Avoid vague phrasing like "a soft spot" and correct tense/grammar ("other country" → "other countries").

예시: I prefer views in my own country because many places are linked to personal memories and cultural familiarity. For example, the coastal cliffs near my hometown remind me of family outings, so I find those scenes more meaningful than similar views abroad.

× Being a nature lover, I love to explore different natural beauty sites whenever I visit them.

✓ As a nature lover, I love to explore different natural beauty sites whenever I visit them.

The original sentence begins with 'Being a nature lover,' which is a reduced participle clause that can sound awkward or nonidiomatic here; while not strictly ungrammatical under the provided list, it is better to use 'As a nature lover' for natural phrasing. This is an issue of verb form/phrase usage and style. Suggestion: use 'As a ...' or a full clause 'Because I am a nature lover,' to make the relationship clear and idiomatic.

× I couldn't resist myself to take the picture of the astonishing view of the nature.

✓ I couldn't resist taking a picture of the astonishing view of nature.

'Couldn't resist myself to take' is incorrect. After 'couldn't resist' the correct structure is verb+ing (gerund). Also 'take the picture' is tightened to 'taking a picture' and 'of the nature' is unidiomatic; use 'of nature' or 'of the natural scenery.' Suggestion: use 'couldn't resist' + gerund and omit unnecessary articles.

× If I have to choose a tougher the views of rural areas as I find the lush greenery to be more beautiful than compared to the buildings in the cities.

✓ If I had to choose, I'd prefer the views of rural areas because I find the lush greenery more beautiful than the buildings in cities.

Multiple issues: 'tougher' is incorrect word choice; conditional phrase 'If I have to choose' mismatches tense and modality and should be 'If I had to choose' or 'If I were to choose.' The comparative phrase 'more beautiful than compared to the buildings in the cities' is redundant and ungrammatical — use 'more beautiful than the buildings in cities.' Also use contracted future/modal 'I'd prefer' or 'I would prefer.' Suggestion: simplify conditional, choose correct comparative structure, and remove redundant words.

× Even though I enjoy the astonishing views of other country, I still prefer the views in my own country as there are personal memories attached to it.

✓ Even though I enjoy the astonishing views of other countries, I still prefer the views in my own country because there are personal memories attached to them.

'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' (singular/plural agreement). Also 'views ... attached to it' mismatches plural 'views' with singular pronoun 'it' — use 'them.' Suggestion: ensure nouns and pronouns agree in number and use 'because' for cause.

× Moreover, I had a soft spot for my own nation.

✓ Moreover, I have a soft spot for my own nation.

The use of past tense 'had' conflicts with the present preference being expressed; use present simple 'have' to show a current, ongoing feeling. Suggestion: use present tense when describing current states or preferences.