Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and avoid asking the examiner for clarification unless necessary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside horizons because I like capturing contrasts in light and texture. Also, I try different angles to make ordinary scenes look more interesting.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with specific reasons and one example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid repeating words or phrases.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because I love being surrounded by natural scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and forests since they offer peaceful atmospheres and diverse colors, especially at sunrise.

제안: Answer directly and concisely with one clear reason and, if appropriate, a brief example. Avoid filler words and hesitation. If mentioning a limitation (like money), state how you cope (e.g., virtual tours, local travel) to complete the response coherently.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different landscapes and cultures. However, since I can't travel much at the moment, I explore foreign scenery through travel documentaries and online photo forums to learn about new places.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. Or what do you mean views or angles?

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. Do you mean views or angles?

Two issues: unnecessary do-support for simple present affirmation and sentence structure. In normal affirmative simple present, 'I like' is correct rather than 'I do like' (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue). Also the second part is a clarification question that should be one direct question: 'Do you mean views or angles?' (Grammar Problem Type 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: use simple present for habitual preferences and form direct questions with subject-verb inversion. Note: Only corrected issues that match the provided problem types.

× I do prefer views in rural areas especially because of the nature because I'm more into nature vibes.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas, especially because of the natural scenery, since I like nature vibes.

Use simple present 'I prefer' rather than 'I do prefer' for stating a general preference (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue). Also 'the nature' is incorrect article use; use 'natural scenery' or 'nature' without 'the' (Grammar Problem Type 22: Article errors). Suggestion: use 'I prefer' for habitual preferences and use 'natural scenery' or simply 'nature' to sound natural.

× I really do wish to go in other countries to, uh, see more views and yeah, to explore more views.

✓ I really want to go to other countries to see more views and to explore more.

'Wish to go' is grammatical but sounds formal/inappropriate for a simple desire; 'want to go' is more natural (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue). Preposition error: use 'go to other countries' not 'go in other countries' (Grammar Problem Type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Also avoid repeating 'views'; use 'explore more' for concision (Grammar Problem Type 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: Use 'want to go to' and remove redundant phrases. Note: only corrected issues that match the provided problem types.

× Well, I don't have enough money, so I can, I can, maybe I can just, uh.

✓ Well, I don't have enough money, so maybe I can't go right now.

The original is fragmented and repetitive. The phrase 'so I can, I can, maybe I can just' is unfinished and confusing; replace with a clear result clause 'so maybe I can't go right now' (Grammar Problem Type 26: Sentence structure errors). Also this maintains present tense/modal meaning (Grammar Problem Type 4: Modal verb usage) by using 'can't' to express inability. Suggestion: avoid filler repetitions and complete the thought with a clear modal verb construction.