Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar, and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with a linking word. Keep to 2–4 sentences and fix verb forms (e.g., “like taking” not “like to taking”).

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, especially mountain landscapes and coastal scenes. For example, I often take photos of mountain ridges at sunrise because the light creates dramatic shadows and colors.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference, then explain with specific reasons and linking words. Reduce repetition and correct grammar (e.g., “When it comes to my preference” and “it depends on the situation”).

예시: I don’t have a strong preference; it depends on the situation. For instance, I like urban views for interesting architecture and street life, but I prefer rural areas when I want peaceful natural scenery.

제안: Give a clear, grammatical response and provide concrete details and linking words. Avoid fillers and vague statements; explain with examples of moods or specific landscapes you like. Keep sentences short and coherent.

예시: I prefer both, depending on my mood and what I want to see. For example, at home I enjoy familiar countryside greenery, but when I travel abroad I like coastal views and new city skylines for variety.

× And in fact, I really like to taking pictures and, uh, I would like to say that like, I really like to taking pictures, uh, of different views of different sites like mountain sides.

✓ And in fact, I really like taking pictures and, uh, I would like to say that I really like taking pictures of different views of places like mountainsides.

Use of the infinitive 'to taking' is incorrect. After 'like' we use the gerund 'taking' not 'to taking'. Also remove filler words and duplicate phrases for clarity. 'Mountain sides' is better as the single word 'mountainsides'. Suggestion: Use 'like taking' or 'to take' (e.g., 'I really like taking pictures' or 'I would like to take pictures').

× So when it's come to my preference, so I would say I do prefer both things.

✓ So when it comes to my preference, I would say I prefer both.

Incorrect verb form 'it's come' should be 'it comes' for present simple usage in the phrase 'when it comes to'. Also 'do prefer' is unnecessary emphasis here; use 'prefer'. Remove redundant 'so' and 'things'. Suggestion: Use set phrase 'when it comes to' and simple present 'I prefer'.

× Sometimes I do prefer urban areas and sometimes I do prefer areas.

✓ Sometimes I prefer urban areas and sometimes I prefer rural areas.

The second clause is incomplete and vague ('areas' repeated). This is a sentence structure and clarity problem. Specify 'rural areas' to contrast with urban areas and use simple present 'prefer' without unnecessary 'do'. Suggestion: Provide parallel structure: 'Sometimes I prefer X and sometimes I prefer Y.'

× It's depend on conditions and situation like you know.

✓ It depends on the conditions and the situation, you know.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' requires 'depends' (third person singular). Also add articles 'the' before 'conditions' and 'situation' for specificity and naturalness. Suggestion: Use 'depends' and include articles where needed.

× Actually, I prefer both things because, uh, uh, sometime like it's depend on totally depends on mood and your preference.

✓ Actually, I prefer both because it totally depends on my mood and my preference.

Multiple tense and redundancy issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb), 'it's depend on totally depends on' is incorrect and repetitive. Use present simple 'depends' and correct pronouns 'my' for speaker's mood and preference. Remove extra 'things' and fillers. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' and a single 'depends on'.

× Sometime you want to like, uh, see Greenery and sometimes you want to like see, uh, Seaview.

✓ Sometimes you want to see greenery and sometimes you want to see a sea view.

Use 'Sometimes' (plural form) and lowercase common nouns 'greenery' and 'sea view'. 'Seaview' is better written as 'sea view' (or 'seaside view'); include an article 'a' before 'sea view'. Remove filler 'like'. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' and avoid filler words; use articles for singular countable phrases.

× So it's depend on to totally depend on like your.

✓ So it totally depends on you.

This fragment is ungrammatical and repetitive: 'it's depend on to totally depend on like your' mixes forms and ends incomplete. Correct subject-verb agreement 'depends' and use the appropriate pronoun 'you' or 'your preference' to complete the thought. Suggestion: Finish the sentence with a clear object: 'depends on your preference' or 'depends on you.'