Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundant phrases, and give one specific supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and smoother linking words. Limit to about 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes so I can choose the best shots later, and this helps me practise composition and lighting.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "activity of trees"—use precise vocabulary (e.g., "rustling leaves," "seasonal colours"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer rural views because I enjoy photographing natural scenes. For example, I like capturing the rustling leaves, wildflowers and changing light, which feel more peaceful and visually interesting than urban scenes.

제안: Make the answer complete and specific. Give a clear topic sentence, then one concrete reason and an example. Correct incomplete endings and awkward phrases like "experience my horizons"—use "broaden my horizons." Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I like views in both my country and abroad, but I prefer views in other countries. Seeing unfamiliar landscapes broadens my horizons and, for instance, I enjoy photographing local architecture and cultural scenes I can't find at home.

× Yeah, I love to taking pictures of different views because actually I like to take a picture and I want to catch the various views because I can choose perfect one after I.

✓ Yeah, I love taking pictures of different views because I actually like to take pictures and I want to capture various views so I can choose the perfect one later.

The phrase 'love to taking' mixes infinitive and gerund forms; after 'love' both 'to' + verb or verb+ing can be used but not combined. Use 'love taking' or 'love to take'. 'Catch' is incorrect for photographing; use 'capture'. 'a picture' should be plural 'pictures' for general habit. 'after I' is incomplete and unclear; use 'later'. Also move 'actually' to sound natural; fix article 'the perfect one'. Suggestion: choose either 'love to take pictures' or 'love taking pictures' consistently.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I like the taking a picture of nature because I can feel the activity of trees or plants or flower, so I love it.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I like taking pictures of nature; I can feel the activity of trees, plants, and flowers, so I love it.

'the taking a picture' is ungrammatical: use 'taking pictures' (gerund + plural) for a habitual action. Use plural 'pictures' and plural nouns 'trees, plants, and flowers'. Remove unnecessary article 'the'. Use commas and conjunctions correctly. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures of nature' and list items with commas and 'and'.

× Actually I like both of them, but I prefer views in other countries because it is unique and I want to experience my horizons and I.

✓ Actually I like both, but I prefer views in other countries because they are more unique and I want to broaden my horizons.

'both of them' is acceptable but 'both' is more natural here. 'it is unique' refers to 'views' (plural) so use plural verb 'they are'. 'experience my horizons' is incorrect collocation; the correct phrase is 'broaden my horizons'. The final 'and I' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use correct idiomatic expressions.