Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors, repetition and unclear phrasing. Make a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Add one or two concise supporting details using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often try several angles and compositions because this helps me capture the best shot. For example, I will move around to include different foreground elements so the picture looks more interesting.

제안: Good choice of content but fix grammar (use prepositions and phrasing correctly), avoid repetition and add a linking phrase to explain why. Use specific details to support your preference.

예시: I prefer rural views to urban ones. Since I live in a city, I appreciate the peace and wide-open scenery in the countryside, so I feel relaxed and inspired when I visit. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and fields because they offer natural colors and textures.

제안: The meaning is unclear and grammar is incorrect. Start with a clear opinion (own country or others), then explain with a specific reason and an example. Use correct sentence structure and common phrases.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they often feel more novel to me. When I travel abroad, I see different styles of architecture and landscapes I haven't experienced at home, which surprises and excites me—for example, visiting coastal cliffs in another country left a strong impression.

× I usually take a picture picture in various views.

✓ I usually take pictures of different views.

The sentence uses singular 'a picture picture' and awkward preposition 'in'. This is a pluralization and preposition issue: use plural 'pictures' when referring generally, and use 'of' to indicate what you are photographing. Also remove the duplicated word. Suggestion: 'I usually take pictures of different views.'

× This is because for getting best picture I should do that.

✓ This is because to get the best pictures I should do that.

The phrase 'for getting' is awkward; use the infinitive 'to get' to express purpose. 'Best picture' needs the article 'the' and plural 'pictures' if referring generally. Word order should be 'to get the best pictures.' Using 'should do that' is acceptable but could be 'I should do this.'

× I prefer to see rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

'Prefer to see rural areas' is grammatically ok but unnatural; 'prefer rural areas' is more natural. The original uses unnecessary 'to see' after 'prefer.' Suggest saying 'I prefer rural areas.'

× This is because I live in urban areas.

✓ This is because I live in an urban area.

When speaking about one's place of residence, use singular 'an urban area' or 'the city' rather than plural 'urban areas.' Also include the indefinite article 'an.'

× So when I see some beautiful landscape in rural areas, I'm very impressed from the from the landscape.

✓ So when I see a beautiful landscape in a rural area, I'm very impressed by the landscape.

Use 'a beautiful landscape' (singular) and 'in a rural area' with article. The correct preposition to show cause of impression is 'impressed by,' not 'impressed from.' Remove the duplicate 'from the.'

× The country of our country is entitled daily things, so when I go trip to other countries and I see the landscape, I'm very surprised.

✓ Life in my country is full of everyday routines, so when I travel to other countries and see the landscapes, I'm very surprised.

Original sentence has incorrect phrase 'The country of our country is entitled daily things' and incorrect noun forms. Replace with clear subject 'Life in my country' and natural phrase 'full of everyday routines.' Use 'travel to other countries' rather than 'go trip' and plural 'landscapes' or 'the landscape.' 'I'm very surprised' is fine. Ensure correct verb forms and word order.