Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a clear, direct topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then add one or two brief supporting details (reason or example). Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places and moods. For example, when I travel I often photograph city skylines at sunset and quiet countryside fields in the morning. These photos remind me of the atmosphere and help me share my experiences with friends.

제안: Again, you repeated the question instead of giving an opinion. State your preference clearly in the first sentence, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words such as "because," "also," or "however" to make your answer coherent. Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because I like open spaces and natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and rivers, which feel more peaceful than busy streets. However, I sometimes photograph urban skylines for variety.

제안: You repeated the examiner's words instead of answering. Give a direct answer about preference for domestic or foreign views, then explain why with a specific reason or example. Mention a contrast if relevant, using linking words like "but" or "while." Keep it natural and limited to a few sentences.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes that I haven't seen before. For example, I loved photographing coastal villages abroad because their architecture and colors were very different from home. While I appreciate local scenery, traveling gives me new inspiration.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views?

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The student's response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/communication error: a question requires an answer, not repetition. Suggestion: respond with a complete answer that matches the question (use 'Yes' or 'No' and add a brief reason or detail). Example: 'Yes, I like taking pictures of different views' or 'No, I prefer photographing people.'

× Do you prefer viewing urban areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

The examiner's original question asks about preference between types of views. The student used 'viewing urban areas', which changes meaning and is less natural. This is a sentence structure/verb choice issue (fits under 'Sentence structure errors'). Suggestion: use the noun 'views' to match the question: 'Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?'. If asking about the activity, use 'Do you prefer viewing urban areas or rural areas?' but that is less natural in this context.

× Do you prefer views in your own countries or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

The student wrote 'your own countries' which mismatches the singular 'your' context. When referring to the listener's country, use singular 'your own country'. This is a singular/plural error. Suggestion: use 'your own country' when referring to the country where the listener is from; use 'other countries' for plural alternatives.