Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答存在多处语法和流利性问题，且表达不连贯。建议：1) 用一句开门见山的话直接回答问题（例如：Yes/No, I don’t usually take photos of landscapes），然后用一到两句具体原因支持观点。2) 注意时态和语法，比如不要用“I'm not worse in”这类错误表达；可改为“I’m not good at taking photos”或“I don’t take good photos”。3) 使用连接词使句子连贯（because / so / however）。4) 控制答案长度在3-4句内，避免断断续续。

예시: No, I don’t usually take pictures of landscapes because I’m not very good at photography. Instead, I prefer to learn from online photos and tutorials so I can improve my composition and technique.

제안: 回答直接但语法和词汇使用有问题，且表达不完整。建议：1) 直接用一句完整话表明偏好（I prefer urban views），随后用1-2句具体原因支持。2) 修正词汇和表达错误，例如用“public transport”或“public transportation”和“easy to get around”替代“get to the wheels”。3) 使用连接词（because / and / so）使语意连贯。4) 增加具体细节如地标、便利设施或氛围。

예시: I prefer urban views because cities are convenient and easy to get around. There is plenty of public transportation like subways and buses, and I enjoy the variety of architecture and lively street scenes.

제안: 回答重复且不完整，语法混乱。建议：1) 直接说明偏好并给出两到三个具体理由（e.g. culture, scenery, food）。2) 避免重复词汇和断句，使用完整句子并连接句子（For example, travelling abroad lets me...）。3) 提供具体例子或对比（比如某个国家的独特景观或文化体验）。4) 控制在3-4句内，确保结尾完整。

예시: I prefer views in other countries because traveling abroad lets me experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, I enjoy visiting historic sites and trying local food, which makes each place feel unique and memorable.

× Well, actually, I. Didn't like. I don't like take pictures of different views because. I'm not worse in. Taking photos. But. I will search on the internet to look for some information about the landscape to learn from it.

✓ Well, actually, I didn't use to like taking pictures of different views because I'm not good at taking photos. But I will search the internet for information about landscapes to learn from them.

问题类型 ID: 26（Sentence structure errors）和 8（Verb + -ing form）的混合。原句中断断续续，句子结构不完整且存在动词形式错误：'Didn't like' 前缺主语和时态衔接，应为 'I didn't use to like'（表示过去习惯）或直接 'I didn't like' 并保持句子连贯；'I don't like take' 中动词后应接动名词，正确为 'like taking'；'I'm not worse in taking photos' 表达不自然且形容词用错，应为 'not good at taking photos'；'search on the internet to look for' 有冗余，简化为 'search the internet for'；'learn from it' 中指代不明，应使用复数 'them' 指代 'landscapes'。建议：将断句合并为完整句，注意动词搭配（like + -ing）、形容词搭配（good at + -ing）、代词与所指名词数的一致。

× Actually, I prefer. Views in urban areas. Because. It is really. Convenient to get to the wheels. For there are many trans public transport like Subway or. But.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in urban areas because it is really convenient to get around. There are many public transport options like the subway.

问题类型 ID: 11（Incorrect use of prepositions）和 26（Sentence structure errors）。原句中 'Convenient to get to the wheels' 是错误和奇怪的用法，正确表达为 'convenient to get around'（表示出行方便）；'trans public transport like Subway' 词序和词形错误，应为 'public transport options like the subway'。此外句子断裂很多，应合并成完整句子并去掉多余的连词 'But'。建议：使用固定搭配 'get around' 表示四处移动，'public transport' 前不加 'trans'，并注意名词前的定冠词 'the subway'（若指特定城市的地铁）。

× Actually, I prefer views in other countries. Because I. Because, travelling, travelling in other countries. Can know more about different culture. In this country. And. I can also enjoy the.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in other countries because travelling in other countries allows me to learn more about different cultures, and I can also enjoy them.

问题类型 ID: 6（Present tense issue）和 13（Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs）以及 26（Sentence structure errors）。原句 'Can know more about different culture' 缺主语且动词时态和语序不当，正确应为 'travelling ... allows me to know/learn more about different cultures'；'different culture' 应为复数 'different cultures'；句子碎片较多且结尾 'enjoy the.' 指代不明，应为 'enjoy them'（指风景）。建议：确保句子有主语（travelling ... allows me），动词与主语一致，名词复数一致，使用清晰的代词指代前文名词。