Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "I like taking photos of different views"), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use linking words (for example, "so" or "because") correctly and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail: say what kinds of views you like and why, and mention one platform as an example.

예시: I like taking photos of different views because it helps me capture interesting scenes and memories. For example, I enjoy photographing city skylines at sunset and mountain landscapes in the morning. I often post my best photos on Instagram so my friends can see and comment.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer rural areas"). Use linking words to explain reasons ("because", "and"). Avoid repeating words and correct verb forms ("take photos", not "click photo"). Provide one specific example of what you like about rural views.

예시: I prefer taking photos in rural areas because they are quieter and cleaner than cities. For instance, I like photographing rice fields at sunrise where the light and mist create a peaceful atmosphere.

제안: Give a direct answer first (e.g., "I prefer taking photos in my own country") and then provide a clear reason using correct grammar. Avoid negative phrasing like "I do not like that" without explanation. Add a specific supporting detail about what you appreciate at home (culture, landscapes, convenience). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer taking photos in my own country because it’s more convenient and affordable for me. Also, I enjoy capturing familiar places and local cultural events that I know well, such as traditional festivals and historic streets.

× Yes, I like to taking photos with different views and different poses because I like to photography and I posted a photo on the some different kind of platforms such as Instagram Snapchat because I because I take a compliment with my friends because I I post my pictures on the Instagram Snapchat, so they do.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos with different views and different poses because I like photography, and I post photos on several platforms such as Instagram and Snapchat because my friends compliment me when I post my pictures there.

The phrase 'like to taking' incorrectly mixes the infinitive 'to' with the -ing form; use either 'like to take' or 'like taking'. 'Like to photography' is wrong because 'photography' is a noun; use 'like photography' or 'like to take photos'. 'Posted a photo' shifted to past tense without context; present simple 'post' fits habitual action. 'the some different kind of platforms' has article and quantifier errors; 'several platforms' is clearer. Remove repeated words and correct conjunctions. Suggestion: use 'like taking' or 'like to take', keep verb tense consistent for habitual actions, and simplify phrases.

× Yes, I like to click photo in my rural areas because rural areas environment and environment is really best and it is all rural areas are very quiet and clean so I so I prefer to clicks photos in rural areas.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos in rural areas because the rural environment is really nice and the countryside is very quiet and clean, so I prefer to take photos there.

Use 'take photos' instead of 'click photo' for natural English. 'In my rural areas' is awkward; use 'in rural areas' or 'in the countryside'. 'Rural areas environment' needs an article and correct noun order: 'the rural environment'. 'Is really best' is incorrect adjective use; use 'really nice' or 'very pleasant'. 'Clicks photos' has third person singular form 'clicks' but subject is I; use 'take' (first person). Suggestion: use correct verb collocations ('take photos'), correct articles, and match verb forms to the subject.

× I lived in my country, so I mostly prefer to take my photos in our country because I do not waste money to to traveling other countries and take some photos.

✓ I live in my country, so I mostly prefer to take my photos here because I do not want to spend money traveling to other countries just to take photos.

Using 'lived' (past) conflicts with present preference 'prefer'; use 'live' for current situation. 'Do not waste money to to traveling' contains infinitive/gerund errors and repetition; use 'spend money traveling' or 'spend money on traveling'. Also 'our country' is inconsistent with 'my country'; use 'here' or 'my country'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present simple) for current facts and use correct verb patterns: 'spend money (on) -ing' or 'spend money to + verb' is not standard.

× I do not like that. So I mostly clicks photos in our country because I like my cover country.

✓ I do not like that. So I mostly take photos in my country because I like my country.

'Clicks' is third person singular but the subject is I; use 'take' for first person. 'Cover country' is a mistaken word; likely intended 'home country' or 'my country'. Suggestion: use correct verb form for the subject and choose the correct noun ('country' or 'home country').