Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and plural/singular forms (e.g., "pictures", "when I go"), and avoid redundancy (don't repeat "I love taking pictures" twice).

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I always photograph landscapes and city scenes so I can remember the places later; I usually share the best shots with friends online.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. State your preference (one or both) in a grammatical sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (however, because, also) and correct word choice ("both" not "both of you").

예시: I like both urban and rural views. Urban scenes interest me because of modern architecture and busy streets, whereas rural views appeal to me because of peaceful landscapes and traditional houses.

제안: Give a clear main sentence, then explain with organized reasons and correct grammar. Use linking phrases such as "first" and "then" or "also". Fix verb forms and plural nouns ("make" not "makes", "memories" not "memory").

예시: I prefer both, but first I want to explore my own country more. For example, I plan to visit local landmarks this year, and afterwards I would like to travel abroad to experience different cultures and take photos to remember those trips.

× Yes, I do like taking picture with different view because I love taking pictures.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because I love taking pictures.

The nouns 'picture' and 'view' need plural form to match 'taking' and 'different' (singular/plural mismatch). Use the preposition 'of' to indicate photographing views and 'pictures' and 'views' should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: use plural nouns consistently when referring to multiple items.

× So every time I went out on a trip I like to take picture to show that I'm outside in different places in moment.

✓ So every time I go out on a trip I like to take pictures to show that I'm in different places at the moment.

Mixed tenses: 'went' is past while the general habit should use present simple 'go'. Also plural 'pictures' required and preposition 'at the moment' is correct for current time. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and correct prepositions and plurals.

× I prefer both of you in the urban area or rural area because I am most type of person that love city and also view in village.

✓ I prefer both urban and rural areas because I am the sort of person who loves the city and also enjoys village scenery.

Several pronoun and determiner errors: 'both of you' is incorrect when meaning 'both'; use 'both urban and rural areas'. 'I am most type of person' should be 'I am the sort of person'. Relative clause requires 'who'. Verb agreement: 'love' -> 'loves' to match 'person'. Also use plural nouns or uncountable forms and clearer vocabulary. Suggestion: use correct expressions for preferences and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I would like to say both because right now I want to explore more in my own country and after that I can. Went to the other country to makes some more memories and capture all them memory that I have in other countries beside my own country.

✓ I would like to say both because right now I want to explore more of my own country and after that I can go to other countries to make more memories and capture all the memories I have in countries besides my own.

Sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms: 'can. Went' is a fragment; use 'can go' (base verb after modal). 'Makes' should be 'make' after 'to'. 'All them memory' should be 'all the memories' and 'beside my own country' should be 'besides my own country'. Also ensure plural 'countries' and proper word order. Suggestion: combine clauses correctly, use base verbs after modals, and use correct plural nouns and determiners.