Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意図が分かるが、文法・語順ミスと冗長さが目立ちます。まず主語＋述語で直接答え、その後に理由や具体例を短く続ける構成にしてください。動詞の不定詞/動名詞の使い方（take/taking）、複数形（pictures/views）、代名詞や時制の一致に注意しましょう。最後に例を完結させ、5文以内に収めてください。例：1文で好みを述べ、2～3文で理由と具体例、最後にまとめる。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help me remember memorable scenes. For example, when I travel, I photograph landscapes and cityscapes to capture special moments. This way I can look back and relive those experiences.

제안: 答えは明確だが、文法（prefer to take vs prefer taking, in/on rural areas）、語彙の使い方（nature, landscape) と意味の伝え方に改善が必要です。理由を述べる際は具体的な描写を加え、接続詞（because, so）や前置詞を正しく使い、文を短く区切って明瞭にしてください。例を述べるときも完結に。

예시: I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because I love natural landscapes and peaceful scenery. For example, my grandmother’s house is in the countryside, and I often photograph the fields and trees there to capture the calm atmosphere.

제안: 意味は伝わるが、文法（prefer views in other countries, I don't often travel abroad）、語順、語形（feel → makes me feel）、複数形や冠詞の誤りが目立ちます。理由を明確にし、具体的な興味（歴史的建造物など）を一文で説明し、接続語でつなげてください。簡潔で自然な表現を心掛け、文を2〜3文にまとめると良いです。

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I don’t travel abroad often, so those sights feel more special to me. I’m especially interested in historical monuments, so I like photographing old buildings and cultural landmarks when I visit another country.

× Yes, I love to taking picture of different view because I have a poor memories, so it's help me remind remained my remained beautiful landscape.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I have poor memory, so they help me remember the beautiful landscapes.

'Love to taking' is incorrect; after 'love' use the base verb or gerund: 'love taking' (Grammar ID 8). 'Picture' and 'view' should be plural to match general meaning (Grammar ID 1). 'A poor memories' is incorrect article and number; use 'poor memory' (Grammar IDs 22 and 1). 'It's help me remind remained my remained beautiful landscape' has several issues: 'it's help' should be 'they help' to agree with plural 'pictures' (subject-verb agreement, Grammar ID 27), 'remind' is used incorrectly; use 'remember' (word choice, related to verb form), and 'remained my remained' is ungrammatical and unnecessary. The corrected sentence uses plural nouns and proper verb forms. Suggestions: use 'love taking', make nouns plural when speaking generally, use 'memory' uncountable, and match subject and verb number.

× I prefer to taking picture on rural areas because I love the nature and the landscape.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because I love nature and the landscape.

'Prefer to taking' is incorrect; after 'prefer' use the gerund or 'to' + base verb, so either 'prefer taking' or 'prefer to take' (Grammar ID 8). 'Picture' should be plural for general preference (Grammar ID 1). Use 'in rural areas' not 'on' (preposition error, Grammar ID 11). 'The nature' is unnatural; use 'nature' without 'the' (article error, Grammar ID 22). Suggestions: say 'I prefer taking pictures in rural areas' or 'I prefer to take pictures in rural areas', and avoid unnecessary articles before uncountable nouns like 'nature'.

× For example my grandmother house is in rural area so I can touch with natural and it's help me feel.

✓ For example, my grandmother's house is in a rural area, so I can be close to nature and it helps me relax.

Multiple issues: missing possessive 'grandmother's' (pronoun/possessive error, Grammar ID 12) and missing article 'a' before 'rural area' (article error, Grammar ID 22). 'Touch with natural' is ungrammatical; use 'be close to nature' or 'connect with nature' (sentence structure and preposition errors, Grammar IDs 26 and 11). 'It's help me feel' should be 'it helps me relax' to use correct subject-verb agreement and natural collocation (Grammar IDs 27 and 13). Suggestions: use possessive forms for family nouns, include articles for singular countable nouns, use natural expressions like 'be close to nature' and choose correct verbs such as 'relax' or 'feel relaxed'.

× I prefer view on another countries because I don't often go foreign countries so it's feel me special moment and I really interested in historical monument.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I don't often travel abroad, so they feel special to me and I am really interested in historical monuments.

'Prefer view' needs plural 'views' (Grammar ID 1). Use 'in other countries' rather than 'on another countries' (preposition and number errors, Grammar IDs 11 and 1). 'Don't often go foreign countries' is incorrect; use 'don't often travel abroad' or 'don't often go to foreign countries' (verb and preposition, Grammar IDs 6 and 11). 'It's feel me special moment' should be 'they feel special to me' to match plural subject and correct verb and preposition (subject-verb agreement and preposition, Grammar IDs 27 and 11). 'I really interested in historical monument' needs 'am' and plural 'monuments' (missing auxiliary verb, Grammar IDs 6 and 1). Suggestions: use 'travel abroad' for fluent expression, ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns, include necessary auxiliary verbs ('am interested'), and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.