Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Give a direct, simple topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two clear supporting details using linking words. Focus on correct vocabulary (e.g., "landscapes", "sunset", "low light") and simple grammar (subject + verb). Avoid unrelated words and keep to 2–3 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like photographing sunsets and city skylines in the evening because the light is warm and creates interesting shadows. Also, I sometimes take photos at night to capture illuminated buildings.

제안: The answer is confusing and contains wrong words. Start with a clear statement saying which you prefer (urban or rural). Then give 1–2 specific reasons, connected with linking words like "because" or "so". Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "urban", "rural", "industrial", "peaceful"). Keep sentences short and grammatical.

예시: I prefer urban views to rural ones. I enjoy cityscapes because there is more activity and interesting architecture, and I can find lively streets and cafes to photograph. However, sometimes I like the calm of the countryside for natural scenes.

제안: This answer has some useful content but is disorganized and contains hesitations and vocabulary mistakes ("dessert" vs "desert"). Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference. Then give specific supporting details with linking words, and avoid filler words. Use accurate vocabulary like "varied landscape", "desert", "beaches", "mountains", and add a closing comment about wanting to travel elsewhere.

예시: I usually prefer views in my own country because it has a very varied landscape, including beaches, mountains and deserts. For example, I often visit the coast for beautiful sunsets and the mountains for hiking and fresh air. Nevertheless, I would also like to see famous landscapes in other countries to compare them.

× Switch on to electricity officer than me especially when she's evening or when dark.

✓ I prefer taking photos of illuminated scenes more than simple daylight scenes, especially in the evening or at night.

The original sentence has many structure and word-choice errors and lacks a clear subject and verb relationship. This matches 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Suggested correction clarifies meaning: 'I prefer taking photos of illuminated scenes' provides a clear subject and verb, 'more than' correctly compares, and 'in the evening or at night' uses correct time expressions. To improve, identify the subject, use a clear verb phrase, and choose correct time expressions (evening, night).

× I absolutely prefer the human areas and if you get her on the industrial Latin and relax, I don't like to say the idiom.

✓ I absolutely prefer urban areas rather than industrial ones; I don't really like industrial landscapes.

This sentence uses incorrect words ('human areas', 'industrial Latin', 'say the idiom') and awkward phrasing, which is an 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (ID 13) and word choice issue. The correction replaces 'human areas' with 'urban areas' and 'industrial Latin' with 'industrial ones' or 'industrial landscapes', and simplifies the dislike statement. To improve, use correct adjectives for place types (urban, rural, industrial) and keep sentences concise and logical.

× In my country, I prefer to be over the beach and the mountains.

✓ In my country, I prefer to be at the beach and in the mountains.

The prepositions 'over' is incorrect for locations like beach and mountains; this is an 'Incorrect use of prepositions' (ID 11). Use 'at the beach' and 'in the mountains' to indicate location. Recommendation: learn common location prepositions: at (points/places), in (enclosed areas or regions), on (surfaces).

× Uh, it's uh, variety landscape.

✓ There is a variety of landscapes.

The phrase 'variety landscape' is ungrammatical and needs a noun phrase 'a variety of landscapes'. This is an 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (ID 13). To improve, use the structure 'a variety of + plural noun' to express diversity.

× There is a dessert, very natural and just beach, mountains, uh, everything you want to see.

✓ There are deserts, very natural ones, and beaches, mountains — everything you want to see.

The original uses singular 'There is' with multiple items and misuses 'dessert' instead of 'desert'. This matches 'There be issue' (ID 3) and 'Singular and plural issue' but primary fix is the 'there is/are' usage. Use 'There are' for plural items and correct spelling 'deserts'. Also separate items clearly. Suggestion: check countability and use 'there is' for singular, 'there are' for plural.

× But, uh, I want to see another place.

✓ However, I would like to visit other places.

The sentence is understandable but slightly awkward for the context; this is a 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). 'I want to see another place' is literal but in travel context 'visit other places' is more natural. Suggest using modal 'would like' for politeness and 'places' plural to match 'another place' vs general desire.