Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "at the time." Use precise reasons (e.g., to capture light, mood, or composition). Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I like capturing interesting landscapes. For example, I often wait for good light at sunrise to highlight textures and colors, and I try different angles to make the scene more dramatic.

제안: Clarify vocabulary and organize the answer. Begin with a direct statement (urban or rural), then explain with specific details and linking words. Avoid filler sounds and unclear words. Use correct nouns and plural forms (e.g., "high-rise buildings").

예시: I prefer urban views because I enjoy city nights and the skyline. For instance, the lights from high-rise buildings and busy streets create an energetic atmosphere that I find fascinating.

제안: Make the preference explicit and give a clear reason with specific details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid unclear references (e.g., "Watson Beach"). Correct grammar and complete sentences are important.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different scenery and cultures. For example, I love coastal views abroad where the sea is a vivid blue and the beaches have unique features I don't see at home.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I want to get good landscape at the time.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I want to get good landscapes at the time.

The noun 'landscape' should be plural ('landscapes') to agree with 'pictures' and the general meaning of multiple photos. This is a noun number issue (use plural for countable nouns when referring to more than one). Also consider replacing 'at the time' with 'at that time' or 'when the lighting is good' for clarity.

× I prefer deals in urban areas because I like watching uh cities night.

✓ I prefer scenes in urban areas because I like watching city nights.

'Deals' is incorrect word choice; 'scenes' or 'views' fits the context. 'Cities night' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'city nights' (plural) to refer to nights in the city. This is a singular/plural and word choice issue; ensure nouns agree in number and choose the appropriate noun meaning.

× I like watching high building and many what.

✓ I like watching tall buildings and many other things.

'High building' should be plural and use the adjective 'tall' not 'high' for buildings: 'tall buildings'. 'Many what' is incomplete; replace with 'many other things' to complete the idea. This fixes adjective choice and plural agreement.

× I think it's better because I could.

✓ I think it's better because I can.

'Could' implies past ability or conditional; the speaker is comparing present preferences, so 'can' is the correct modal verb. This is a tense/modal choice issue and sentence meaning problem. Use 'can' to express present ability or preference.

× I like Watson Beach color, so when each color is blue, I like all of these.

✓ I like the color of Watson Beach, so when the water is blue I like it very much.

'Watson Beach color' needs an article and clearer noun phrasing: 'the color of Watson Beach'. 'Each color is blue' is odd; probably means 'when the water is blue'. 'I like all of these' is vague; 'I like it very much' or 'I like those colors' is clearer. This corrects article use, noun phrasing, and clarity.