Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用更自然、简洁的表达，并注意语法与词汇搭配。当前回答有语法和搭配错误（如 sea space, after the memory），句子略长且重复。可以用一到两句主题句加一到两句具体细节，用连接词保持连贯。尝试替换口语填充词（well, yeah）并把动词时态一致化。

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take photos of mountains and city skylines because they capture the atmosphere of a place; I then look at these pictures later to remember my trips.

제안: 纠正语法错误并避免非正式口语或无关短语（如 prefering, joined to, Wait for me）。回答应直接先给出偏好，然后用一两句具体原因并用连接词承接。注意使用正确的固定搭配（prefer urban views, attracted to the energy）。

예시: I prefer urban views because I am attracted to the city's vibrant atmosphere. For instance, the busy streets and bright lights make me feel excited and connected to everything going on around me.

제안: 提高句子准确性与流畅度，修正表达错误（the view see my old country）。先直接回答偏好，再给出具体原因与对比，使用连接词（however, but, although）来表达转折，细节更具体会更好。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I know the landscapes well and can visit them easily. However, I would also like to see places like New Zealand or the USA because they offer dramatic natural scenery that I haven't experienced before.

× Well, I definitely preferring urban views.

✓ Well, I definitely prefer urban views.

原句中“preferring”使用了现在分词，但在该陈述句中应使用一般现在时的动词原形“prefer”来表示习惯性或偏好。建议使用一般现在时来表达常态或长期偏好：I prefer ...。

× So when I see a beautiful view, I will take out my phone to capture it so I can look back after the memory.

✓ So when I see a beautiful view, I will take out my phone to capture it so I can look back on the memory later.

原句中“look back after the memory”搭配不当。常用搭配为“look back on the memory”或“look back at the photos later”。此外加入“later”使时间更自然。建议记住常见固定搭配，如“look back on”表示回忆。

× I prefer the view see my old country because I'm more familiar with the landscapes and can visit them easily.

✓ I prefer the views of my home country because I'm more familiar with the landscapes and can visit them easily.

原句中“the view see my old country”结构错误且代词/名词使用不当。应改为“the views of my home country”或“the view in my home country”。“old country”在此语境不自然，常用“home country”。此外“views”用复数更符合多处风景。

× I mean, rural views are peaceful. I enjoy them sometimes, but I'm more joined to the energy of the city.

✓ I mean, rural views are peaceful. I enjoy them sometimes, but I'm more drawn to the energy of the city.

原句中“joined to the energy”用词不当，应使用“drawn to”或“attracted to”表示被城市能量吸引。建议学习常见搭配表达“被...吸引”。

× So yeah, definitely urban views. Wait for me.

✓ So yeah, definitely urban views.

句尾“Wait for me.”与上下文不相关，显得突兀。应删除不必要的句子以保持连贯。若想表达“等我去看看”，应改为更明确的句子。