Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然并且结构清晰。先用一句主题句直接回答，再给1–2个具体细节或原因并使用连接词。注意语法（动词单复数、时态）和填充词（uh）要少用。可以把句子控制在不超过5句内，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because they are often very beautiful and calming. For example, I like capturing sunsets and city skylines, which always lift my mood. When I take these photos, I feel happy and relaxed.

제안: 回答应直接给出偏好并提供具体原因，使用连词使句子连贯。避免脱节的词列举（hospital school shopping），要把这些点用完整短语表达并说明为什么这些因素让你更喜欢城市景观。

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer a variety of facilities and activities. For instance, there are hospitals, schools and shopping centers, which create a lively atmosphere. I enjoy the dynamic scenes and the convenience they provide.

제안: 回答应完整并提供具体理由，避免中断或不完整的句子。可以说明哪些方面让国家更吸引你（风景、文化、食物或人们的性格），并用连接词组织句子。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I find its landscapes and culture very familiar and charming. For example, the local architecture and natural scenery remind me of home, and the friendliness of the people makes visiting places more enjoyable.

× So when I take a pictures, I will very happy.

✓ So when I take pictures, I will be very happy.

句中使用了定冠词/不定冠词错误。英語中 picture 為可數名詞，複數形式為 pictures，不應加不定冠詞 a。動詞短語部分缺少系動詞 be，正確結構為 "will be very happy"。建議：可數名詞複數不加 a；未來式的狀態要用 will + be。

× So I like, uh taking picture, uh, of different.

✓ So I like taking pictures of different views.

句子中名詞、修飾語順序及單複數使用不當。應使用複數 pictures 並明確名詞後接修飾名詞 views，且不需要在 like 與 taking 間插入額外逗點。建議：把非謂語動詞短語保持連貫（like taking pictures of ...），並使用恰當名詞或名詞短語作賓語。

× I prefer urban areas because urban areas, uh, have hospital school. Shopping, so I feel very happy.

✓ I prefer urban areas because urban areas have hospitals, schools, and shopping, so I feel very happy.

句子結構不完整且名詞單複數錯誤。hospital 和 school 作為可數名詞，在泛指時應使用複數 hospitals, schools；Shopping 單獨放一句不構成完整名詞短語，應與其他項目並列。建議：列舉多個設施時使用複數形式並用連詞或逗號連接以形成完整句子。

× I prefer our own country because my country is beautiful. Uh, the people in our country are.

✓ I prefer our own country because my country is beautiful, and the people in our country are friendly.

末尾句不完整，缺少表語來描述 people。需要補充形容詞（如 friendly）或其他描述詞以完成句子。建議：確保有謂語和表語，使句子語意完整，例如 'the people ... are friendly/very kind' 等。

× Yes, I like because, uh, different views, very beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like it because different views are very beautiful.

句子缺少形式賓語 it 與連繫動詞 are，導致結構不完整。應使用 'I like it because ...' 或直接 'I like different views because they are very beautiful.' 此外，views 為複數，需與複數謂語 are 一致。建議：在表達原因時使用完整從句並注意主謂一致。