Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and unclear. Give a direct topic sentence (Yes/No) and then briefly explain why, using one or two supporting details and a linking word. Also correct grammar: say "I don't like taking pictures" or "No, I don't."

예시: No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than photograph it. For example, when I travel I focus on experiencing the place and talking to locals instead of trying to capture every scene.

제안: Your response is confused and grammatically incorrect. Clearly state your preference first (e.g. "I prefer rural areas") and then give one or two specific reasons using a linking word like "because" or "so". Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery and quiet surroundings. For instance, I like seeing fields and mountains which help me relax after a busy week.

제안: Your reply is incomplete and ungrammatical. Answer directly ("I prefer views in other countries") and add a reason or example with a linking word such as "because" or "for example." Keep answers concise and natural.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes I haven't seen before. For example, I love exploring historic towns and coastal scenery abroad which feel very different from home.

× I don't like.

✓ I don't like taking pictures.

The student's reply 'I don't like.' is grammatically complete but contextually incomplete because the examiner asked about taking pictures of different views; the response should explicitly state the object of dislike. This is a sentence structure/content clarity issue. Suggestion: include the verb's object or gerund phrase that matches the question (e.g., 'I don't like taking pictures').

× Or rural areas. No, I don't like.

✓ I prefer rural areas. No, I don't like taking pictures of urban views.

'Or rural areas.' is a fragment and does not answer the preference question clearly. The second sentence 'No, I don't like.' is contextually incomplete. This is a sentence structure and clarity error. Suggestion: give a full sentence stating the preference ('I prefer rural areas') and, if refusing, include the object ('I don't like taking pictures of urban views') to match the question.

× I other countries.

✓ I prefer other countries.

'I other countries.' is missing a verb and is therefore a sentence without a verb/fragment; this is a sentence structure error. The examiner asked whether the student prefers views in their own country or other countries, so the correct reply should include a verb such as 'prefer' or 'like' (e.g., 'I prefer other countries'). Suggestion: always include an appropriate verb to complete the sentence and directly address the question.