Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more coherent and relevant: answer directly, avoid filler words, and give a clear reason or brief example. Keep it within 1–3 concise sentences. Use linking words if you add a detail.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel by car. For example, I often stop at scenic spots to photograph landscape scenes and then text the photos to my family.

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence: begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason with a linking phrase. Correct verb forms and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., 'relaxed' rather than 'unwind' as a noun). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer rural views because I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers. They help me feel relaxed and give me a peaceful break from the city's hustle and bustle.

제안: Make your answer more natural and concise: start with a direct statement, then give a specific reason and an example. Avoid awkward phrases like 'for my opinions' and repetition of 'always'.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I love exploring new places and cultures. For example, I enjoy photographing unfamiliar architecture and landscapes abroad and posting the best shots to share with my friends.

× I prefer rural areas because I like look at mountains and rivers.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I like looking at mountains and rivers.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb should use the -ing form (gerund). 'look' should be 'looking' to form 'like looking'. Use: like + verb-ing for general preferences. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I think in downside I will feel unwind and get away from bustle and.

✓ I think on the downside I will feel more relaxed and get away from the bustle.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition 'in' and awkward phrasing 'downside' and 'feel unwind' and an incomplete final phrase. 'on the downside' is the correct idiom; 'feel unwind' should be 'feel more relaxed' (adjective) or 'unwind' as verb in 'I can unwind'. Also add 'the' before 'bustle' and remove trailing 'and'. Ensure sentence is complete and natural. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× For my opinions, I like other countries more because I always enjoy exploring new things and in other countries I always take pictures and share with my friends.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer other countries because I always enjoy exploring new things, and in other countries I always take pictures and share them with my friends.

Use 'in my opinion' not 'for my opinions'. Use 'prefer' instead of 'like ... more' for concision (both acceptable but 'prefer' fits). Also when mentioning sharing pictures, include the object 'them' after 'share' to clarify what is shared. Commas help separate clauses. This fixes incorrect preposition/phrase and makes sentence clearer. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I always, uh, chat with my family and tell them what I say.

✓ I always, uh, chat with my family and tell them what I say.

This sentence is grammatical but potentially unclear: 'tell them what I say' is odd because 'say' implies speaking rather than reporting. For clarity, use 'tell them what I see' or 'tell them what I'm seeing' if referring to describing pictures while driving. However, since the instruction is to only correct mistakes in the provided Grammar_Problem_Type_List, no change is required. No grammar error matching the listed types except clarity; therefore the original sentence is kept. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Yes, I like taking photos, especially when I'm driving.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos, especially when I'm driving.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the present continuous for an action occurring while driving. No correction needed. It uses 'like' + verb-ing correctly. Kept for completeness. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

This question is grammatically correct and requires no change. It uses the present simple 'do you prefer' appropriately. Kept for completeness. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This question is grammatically correct; no change needed. It correctly uses the present simple to ask about preferences. Grammar problem type ID: 6