Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然且表达了喜好，但存在重复和句子结构不够紧凑的问题。建议：1) 避免重复词（例如重复使用“like”与“I would”），精简句子。2) 用一到两句的主题句直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，比如说拍什么场景、拍照的目的或感受。3) 使用连接词（for example, such as, because）使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. For example, when I go trekking or on a road trip I often photograph the scenery I pass, such as mountain ranges and rivers, because I want to remember the atmosphere of the place.

제안: 答案有明确偏好并给出原因和例子，但表达不够地道且有语法问题（如“that's so identical”用法错误）。建议：1) 使用更准确的形容词（e.g. ‘uniform’或‘similar’代替 ‘identical’）。2) 将原因和具体例子用连接词组织起来（because, for example）。3) 注意句子简洁，避免口语填充词。

예시: I prefer rural views to urban ones because cityscapes often look quite similar with many skyscrapers. In the countryside I can see a variety of landscapes, for example mountains, lakes and small villages, which I find more interesting.

제안: 回答表达了偏好并给出具体类型，但存在语法错误（例如“a different types”，“another countries”）和口语填充词。建议：1) 注意名词单复数和冠词（e.g. “different types of landscapes”，“other countries”）。2) 用一两句说明为什么偏好本国风景，并补充一两句说明为什么也喜欢国外风景以丰富内容。3) 删除无意义的填词如“uh”。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because it offers many different types of landscapes, from highlands and plateaus to oceans and grasslands. However, I also enjoy views in other countries because they let me experience unfamiliar scenery and different cultural settings.

× I like taking pictures of different views, like when I was going on an adventure outside, like trekking and going on a road trip, I would like to take photos of the scenery that I passed through and.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views. For example, when I go on an adventure outside, like trekking or going on a road trip, I like to take photos of the scenery I pass through.

原句中時態和動詞形式不一致，混用了過去進行式“was going”與一般現在習慣性描述，且句子過長且結尾多餘“and”。根據語境（習慣性動作）應使用一般現在時；把長句拆成兩句會更清晰。建議將“was going”改為“go”，把“would like to take”簡化為“like to take”，並刪除多餘連接詞“and”。

× Not actually, I prefer rural views because in the cities there's so many skyscrapers but that's so identical.

✓ Not really. I prefer rural views because in the cities there are so many skyscrapers, and they all look very similar.

原句中“there's”是“there is”的縮寫，與複數主語“so many skyscrapers”不一致，應使用“there are”。此外“that's so identical”用法不自然，應改為“they all look very similar”更符合英語表達。建議使用“not really”替換“不 actually”，並修正主謂一致與形容詞用法。

× But instead in rural areas I can say different types of landscapes like mountains, like lakes and even different tiny villages.

✓ Instead, in rural areas I can see different types of landscapes, such as mountains, lakes and even small villages.

原句中開頭連詞“but instead”重複且語序不自然，且“I can say different types”用詞不準確，應使用“I can see”來描述所見景色；“tiny villages”用“small villages”更常用。建議刪去多餘連詞，改用“such as”列舉，並修正動詞和形容詞。

× Absolutely my country because my country has a different types of landscapes from highland to plateau, from oceans to grassland.

✓ Absolutely my country, because my country has different types of landscapes, from highlands to plateaus, and from oceans to grasslands.

原句中“a different types”中冠詞與複數名詞不匹配，應刪去不必要的冠詞或改為單數形式。此外“highland”與“plateau”等在此處應使用複數形式以匹配“types”。建議改為“different types of landscapes”並將各地形名詞改為複數或配合前後文一致。

× But I also like, uh, views in another countries that I like to experience different types of view.

✓ But I also like views in other countries because I want to experience different types of scenery.

原句中“in another countries”有兩處錯誤：1) “another”用於單數，可數名詞前；2) “countries”為複數，應搭配“other”。此外“types of view”不自然，應使用“types of scenery”。最後“that I like to experience”語序和連接詞不當，應改為“because I want to experience”。建議使用“other countries”和“scenery”，並調整連接詞和動詞短語。