Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và vốn từ để trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sửa các lỗi số nhiều và thì, loại bỏ tiếng nấp (uh) và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn thích chụp, mục đích chụp).

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different scenes. I find landscape and street photography relaxing because it helps me focus and notice small details, such as light and color. For example, I like photographing sunsets by the river to capture warm tones and reflections.

제안: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (chủ-động từ, thì), diễn đạt rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn; dùng từ chính xác thay cho các cụm mơ hồ như "the slower bit applies". Thêm liên kết logic và cụ thể hóa lý do (ví dụ: không khí trong lành, phong cảnh rộng lớn, hoạt động ngoài trời).

예시: I prefer rural areas because I grew up in the countryside and enjoy the wide open spaces and fresh air. I also appreciate the slower pace of life and friendly locals, which makes outdoor photography and walking much more pleasant.

제안: Cải thiện phát âm cho các từ quan trọng, sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu (ví dụ: "I like views in my country"), tránh tiếng nấp, và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn về sự khác biệt (ví dụ: phong cảnh quen thuộc vs kiến trúc độc đáo).

예시: I prefer views in my own country because familiar landscapes and traditions make me feel relaxed. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries for their vibrant cityscapes and unique architecture, such as historic cathedrals or modern skyscrapers, which offer new photographic opportunities.

× I like taking picture of different real because it bring me relax feeling and I can uh, searching.

✓ I like taking pictures of different places because they bring me a relaxed feeling and I can, uh, search.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural -> Grammar Problem Type ID 1 (Singular and plural issue). 'real' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'places' -> treated as noun choice not in list but corrected. 'bring' must agree with plural subject 'pictures' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors). Missing article and adjective order: 'relax feeling' should be 'a relaxed feeling' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) and ID 22 (Article errors). 'searching' used incorrectly; after 'can' use base verb 'search'. This is Modal verb usage rule -> Grammar Problem Type ID 4. Suggestions: use plural 'pictures', match verb to subject, use 'a relaxed feeling', and follow modal 'can' with base verb 'search'.

× I prefers rural areas because I grew up in the countryside and I enjoy the open space.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I grew up in the countryside and I enjoy the open space.

Error: 'prefers' is third person singular form but subject is 'I' so use base form 'prefer' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 2 (Third person singular issue). Suggestion: use 'I prefer' for first person subjects; ensure verb form matches subject person and number.

× And before I'm afraid, I also appreciate the friendly local people and the slower bit applies.

✓ Before, I was shy, but I also appreciate the friendly local people and the slower pace.

Errors: 'And before I'm afraid' mixes tenses and is ungrammatical: use past tense 'I was shy' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 5 (Past tense issue). 'the slower bit applies' is incorrect phrase; 'slower pace' is the correct noun phrase and no 'applies' needed -> Grammar Problem Type ID 26 (Sentence structure errors) and ID 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) for wording. Suggestion: express past state with 'was', use 'slower pace' to describe atmosphere, and connect ideas with 'but' or ','.

× I like you is my country because it's similar and uh make me feel relaxed.

✓ I like my own country because it's familiar and makes me feel relaxed.

Errors: 'I like you is my country' is ungrammatical and wrong pronoun; should be 'my own country' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and ID 22 (Article errors). 'similar' is incorrect choice; 'familiar' fits meaning -> ID 13. Verb 'make' must agree with singular subject 'it' so 'makes' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 2 (Third person singular issue). Suggestion: use 'my own country', select correct adjective 'familiar', and use 'makes' for 'it'.

× I also enjoy view in other countries because they are live and exciting.

✓ I also enjoy views in other countries because they are lively and exciting.

Errors: 'view' should be plural 'views' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 1 (Singular and plural issue). 'they are live' uses wrong adjective; use 'lively' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and use correct adjective forms.

× For example, seek different view of architecture.

✓ For example, I seek different views of architecture.

Errors: Missing subject 'I' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 23 (Sentence without a verb) and ID 26 (Sentence structure errors). 'view' should be plural 'views' -> Grammar Problem Type ID 1 (Singular and plural issue). Also 'seek' is fine but needs a subject. Suggestion: include subject and pluralize 'views'.