Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focalizzati sulla chiarezza e sulla correttezza grammaticale. Evita esitazioni come “umm” e frasi ambigue come “I don't mind about my phone”; usa invece una struttura diretta: affermazione + motivo. Mantieni la risposta entro 3-4 frasi e usa connettori semplici (because, so) per rendere il discorso fluido.

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of views because I prefer to enjoy them directly with my eyes. For example, when I watch a sunset I focus on the colors and the moment rather than taking pictures. This helps me feel more relaxed and present.

제안: Migliora l'accordo soggetto-verbo e la coesione della frase. Usa parole più precise e riduci ripetizioni: ad esempio 'skyscrapers' e 'buildings full of lights' possono essere unite. Inserisci un connettore per spiegare il motivo e limitati a 2-3 frasi concise.

예시: I prefer urban views, especially in the evening when skyscrapers and lit buildings create a vivid atmosphere. The city feels alive and energetic, which I find exciting. That's why I enjoy city views more than rural ones.

제안: Correggi errori di pronuncia/scrittura e costruzione delle frasi, evita ripetizioni e esitazioni. Organizza la risposta: dichiarazione diretta, ragione specifica con esempi concreti (coste, montagne, città storiche). Mantieni massimo 3-4 frasi e usa connettori (for example, also) per chiarezza.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I live in Italy and it has incredibly varied scenery. For example, we have long beautiful coastlines, picturesque mountains, and historic cities like Rome. These diverse landscapes make Italy uniquely fascinating to me.

× No, I don't like taking picture of different views because very often I don't mind about my phone or my camera.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because very often I don't pay attention to my phone or my camera.

The phrase 'taking picture' needs plural 'pictures' (count noun) and 'don't mind about' is incorrect here; 'pay attention to' is the correct collocation. Use 'taking pictures' and 'pay attention to' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I rather umm, watch for example sunset with my own eye.

✓ I'd rather, for example, watch the sunset with my own eyes.

'I rather' is incorrect; the correct contraction is 'I'd rather' or 'I would rather'. 'Watch for example sunset' should be 'for example, watch the sunset'. 'My own eye' is unnatural; use the plural 'my own eyes'. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'sunset'.

× I prefer views in urban areas, especially in the evening when you can see the skyscraper, the buildings full of lights is very special, because the city is full of lives, is very electric.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas, especially in the evening when you can see the skyscrapers and the buildings full of lights; it is very special because the city is full of life and is very electric.

Use plural 'skyscrapers' for general reference. Combine nouns with 'and' and make the verb agree: 'buildings full of lights is' should be 'buildings full of lights; it is' or rephrase. 'Full of lives' is incorrect; use the uncountable noun 'life'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and use appropriate noun forms.

× I prefer views in my own country because I live in Italy and I think Italy is one of the most fascinating country in the world.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I live in Italy and I think Italy is one of the most fascinating countries in the world.

'One of the most' requires a plural noun: 'countries' not 'country'. Ensure noun number matches quantifiers like 'one of the'.

× In Italy we have a beautiful coast all all along our pen issue.

✓ In Italy we have a beautiful coast all along our peninsula.

The phrase 'all all along our pen issue' appears to be a mispronunciation/misspelling. The correct word is 'peninsula' and the structure should be 'all along our peninsula' or 'along our entire coastline'. Remove duplicated 'all' and use the correct noun.

× Uh, you can also find mountain a beautiful city like Rome for.

✓ You can also find mountains and beautiful cities like Rome.

Word order and plurality are incorrect. Use plural 'mountains' and 'cities' when speaking generally. Place adjectives before nouns: 'beautiful cities'. The word 'for' at the end is unnecessary and should be omitted.