Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子结构和语法需要改进；回答应更自然并稍作扩展以显得完整。可以用一到两句话直接回答，然后用一到两句简短的原因或例子支持，避免重复和语法错误。注意动词单复数和定冠词。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me record memorable moments and beautiful scenes. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes to remember how they looked.

제안: 回答较长但结构混乱，有语法和用词问题（如时态、单复数、连词）。应先给出直接答案，然后用1–2个具体理由支持并用连接词衔接，避免宗教表述不必要的夸张。可以加入具体例子（如海滩、山景）使内容更具体。

예시: I prefer rural areas. I grew up in Hualien, which has beautiful beaches and mountains, and I find the natural scenery and quiet atmosphere very relaxing. For instance, I like walking along the coast at sunset.

제안: 表达不够连贯，语法和词汇有多处错误（复数、冠词、冗余词）。应先直接回答，然后比较原因并给出具体例子，使用连接词（however, because, while）。结尾要完整，不要断句。

예시: I prefer views in my own country. Although places like Japan and Thailand are beautiful, Taiwan feels more familiar and comfortable to me because I know the culture and local scenery. For example, when I visit a mountain or a beach in Taiwan, I feel a strong sense of belonging.

× I like to take picture, to record everything I saw in my life.

✓ I like to take pictures to record everything I see in my life.

句中“picture”應為複數“pictures”，因為說話者表達的是持續性的習慣／愛好（拍很多照片），而不是一張單數的照片。另外“to record everything I saw in my life”時態不一致，前半句是現在習慣，用現在式更自然：用“see”而非過去式“saw”。建議：當談論習慣或重複行為時，使用複數名詞（如果指多個項目）並保持時態一致。

× Well, actually I prefer rural areas because I live in Hualien which is my hometown and this is full of natural landscape and enjoy the relaxation from the sky and the ocean and all of the scene made by God.

✓ Well, actually I prefer rural areas because I live in Hualien, which is my hometown. It is full of natural landscapes, and I enjoy the relaxation from the sky and the ocean and all the scenery made by God.

句中有多處需要定冠詞或複數形式：“this is full of natural landscape”應改為“It is full of natural landscapes”或“the natural landscape”，更自然是複數“landscapes”。“all of the scene”應為“all the scenery”或“all of the scenes”。此外需把長句拆分並補上代詞“It”來指代前面提到的地方。建議：注意可數/不可數名詞與定冠詞的用法，並將長句分成更簡短的句子以保持語法清晰。

× Oh absolutely my country. I have been to a different place such as Japan and Thailand, Philippine, this thing are beautiful.

✓ Oh, absolutely my country. I have been to different places such as Japan, Thailand, and the Philippines; these places are beautiful.

“a different place”用法不當，應為複數“different places”來表示多個國家／地點。“Philippine”應為複數名詞“the Philippines”且通常前面要加定冠詞“the”。“this thing are beautiful”主詞與動詞不一致且指代不明，應改為“these places are beautiful”。建議：列舉多個地點時用複數，並注意地名的正確形式與主謂一致。

× However, I saw the the scene in Taiwan, I can feel more like I'm home and.

✓ However, when I see the scenery in Taiwan, I feel more at home.

原句中“the the”為重複錯誤需刪除，且使用“saw”造成時態不一致（前句講一般偏好或經驗應用現在時），應改為“see”或“when I see”。“I can feel more like I'm home and.”結尾冗長且不完整，應改為“I feel more at home”來表達更地道的感覺。建議：避免重複詞，保持時態一致，使用固定搭配“feel at home”來表達“感覺像在家”。