Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatical, slightly longer (2-3 sentences), and add specific details. Use linking words for coherence. For example, state that you enjoy it, explain why (e.g., capture memories or beauty), and give a brief example of what you photograph.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places and moments. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and park landscapes in the morning light, which I later share with friends.

제안: Correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Give a clear topic sentence saying which you prefer, then add one or two specific reasons linked with words like "because" or "because of". Keep it concise and natural.

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because I like the contrast of modern buildings and busy streets. For instance, I enjoy photographing illuminated skyscrapers and street scenes at night because they look lively and dramatic.

제안: Use correct grammar and make your preference explicit. Provide a reason and a brief example or comparison. Use linking words such as "because" or "however" to make it coherent.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I'm more familiar with the best spots and local seasons. For example, at home I know where to photograph the coastal cliffs at sunrise, which gives me more satisfying results than when I first visit a foreign place.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different view.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The nouns 'picture' and 'view' should be plural because the speaker refers to taking more than one picture of various views. Use plural nouns after verbs like 'take' when referring to multiple items: 'pictures' and 'views'. Suggestion: Make nouns plural when speaking about general, countable, multiple items.'

× I think I like prefer you in urban area.

✓ I think I prefer urban areas.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the pronoun 'you' and duplicates verbs 'like prefer'. Also 'urban area' should be plural or count noun with an article. Correct structure: choose one verb ('prefer') and remove 'you'. Use 'urban areas' to refer generally to cities. Suggestion: Use a single main verb ('prefer') and correct pronoun or omit unnecessary pronoun; use plural for general places.'

× Yeah, I think I like prefer you in my country.

✓ Yes, I think I prefer my country.

This sentence has the same problems: redundant verbs 'like prefer' and incorrect pronoun 'you'. Also 'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' fits spoken test. Keep one verb ('prefer') and state the object 'my country'. Suggestion: Use one verb ('prefer') and the correct object ('my country'); avoid unnecessary pronouns.