Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 응답이 너무 짧고 문법적으로도 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 질문에 대한 주제 문장을 완성된 문장으로 말하세요(예: I enjoy taking photos of different views.). 그 다음 왜 그런지 간단한 이유나 구체적 예시를 덧붙이세요. linking word(For example, because, so 등)를 사용해 문장을 연결하면 자연스러워집니다. 어휘는 'picture' 대신 'photos' 또는 'photographs' 같은 적절한 명사를 사용하세요.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me remember places I visit. For example, when I travel to a new city I often photograph the skyline and local streets to capture the atmosphere.

제안: 질문에 대해 '예'만 대답한 것은 불충분합니다. 질문은 선택을 요구하므로 반드시 한 쪽을 명확히 선택하고 이유를 설명해야 합니다. 주제문(예: I prefer rural views.)을 제시한 뒤, 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 구체적인 이유나 비교를 제공하세요. 또한 길이는 최대 5문장 내로 유지하세요.

예시: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more relaxing. For example, I enjoy photographing green fields and small villages, which feel peaceful compared to busy city streets.

제안: 문장이 어색하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 질문에 대해 명확한 선택(예: I prefer views in other countries.)을 말하고, 그 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어(because, so, for instance)를 사용해 설명을 자연스럽게 이어가고 'other countries' 대신 'other countries'를 주어에 맞게 사용하세요. 가능하면 한두 개의 구체적 예시를 덧붙이세요.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes to explore. For instance, I love photographing historic streets in Europe and vibrant markets in Asia, which are very different from places at home.

× Yes, I like picture.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures.

The student used the singular noun 'picture' without an article, which is ungrammatical in this context. The correct response to the question about taking pictures is to use the plural 'pictures' or the gerund phrase 'taking pictures'. Use 'a picture' only if referring to one specific photo. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures' or 'I like pictures.'

× Yes.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

The answer 'Yes.' is inappropriate for a choice question asking preference between urban and rural areas; it does not address which option is preferred. This is a sentence structure/response error rather than grammar of a word form. Provide a complete sentence that states the preference matching the question. Suggestion: choose one option and respond, e.g., 'I prefer rural areas.' or 'I prefer urban areas.'

× On other country picture.

✓ I prefer pictures of other countries.

The original phrase has incorrect preposition 'On', incorrect noun form 'country' (singular) and lacks articles. The question asks preference between views in your own country or other countries, so the correct reply should use plural 'countries' and the preposition 'of' to indicate what the pictures depict: 'pictures of other countries.' Suggestion: say 'I prefer pictures of other countries.' or 'I prefer views in other countries.'