Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and preposition errors (say “when I travel” not “in I have a trip”), and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I travel, I usually photograph landscapes and candid shots of myself to remember the trip, because photos help me recall the atmosphere and details later.

제안: Give a clear reason with correct grammar and specific details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid vague or incorrect expressions (“made eyes” is unclear). Use comparative language correctly (wider, more natural).

예시: I prefer rural views because they are more natural and wider than city scenes. For example, I like open fields and forests where I can hear birds and see long horizons, which feels more relaxing than crowded streets.

제안: Answer directly with a topic sentence and then justify it with specific reasons. Avoid filler phrases ("this question is an open question") and correct grammar (use “don’t” → “doesn’t”, remove repeated words). Provide an example or contrast.

예시: I like views both in my own country and abroad because each place offers different scenery. For instance, home has familiar landscapes and cultural details, while other countries often have unique architecture and natural features I haven't seen before.

× Yes, I totally like it, especially in I have a trip and in this travel I often take various pictures such as scenery and myself.

✓ Yes, I really like it, especially when I travel; on these trips I often take various pictures of scenery and of myself.

The original sentence misuses prepositions 'in' with 'I have a trip' and 'in this travel'. Use 'when I travel' or 'on a trip' to indicate time/situation. Also use 'pictures of scenery' and 'pictures of myself' (preposition 'of') to indicate the object of the pictures. Other improvements: replace 'totally' with more natural 'really' and restructure into clearer clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Indeed, I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas is more natural and more wide, more grounds than city views, and city views often made eyes.

✓ Indeed, I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas are more natural and wider, with more open ground than city views, and city views can be tiring to the eyes.

The original has subject-verb agreement error: 'rural areas is' should be 'rural areas are' (plural subject requires plural verb). 'More wide' should be comparative 'wider'. 'More grounds' is unnatural; use 'more open ground' or 'more space'. 'City views often made eyes' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is that city views can strain or tire the eyes, so use 'can be tiring to the eyes.' Fixing these preserves meaning and corrects verb-number agreement and word choice. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I think this this question is an open question. It don't have a precise answer. I both like it and I like it both because every country's scenery is different and very beautiful.

✓ I think this question is open. It doesn't have a precise answer. I like both; I like views in my own country and in other countries because every country's scenery is different and very beautiful.

Errors include duplicated 'this this' and incorrect pronoun/verb agreement 'It don't have' — 'it' requires 'doesn't'. Also sentence structure 'I both like it and I like it both' is awkward and unclear; replace with 'I like both' and clarify what 'both' refers to. Additionally specify 'views in my own country and in other countries' to match the question. The corrections fix pronoun-verb agreement and improve clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 12