Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ âm và chính tả cơ bản ("talking" → "taking"). Trả lời nên trực tiếp, đầy đủ và tự nhiên hơn: dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tối đa 2–3 câu bổ sung. Ví dụ nêu lý do ngắn gọn hoặc hoàn cảnh chụp để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like capturing landscapes because they show the atmosphere of a place, such as light at sunrise or interesting cloud formations.

제안: Cần cải thiện rõ ràng và trật tự ý. Tránh lỗi phát âm/viết ("refer grills in rural race" không rõ) và giữ câu ngắn gọn. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (I prefer...), sau đó giải thích một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể, dùng từ nối nếu cần.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because the scenery is calmer and there are more natural elements like trees and fields. Also, the air is fresher there, which makes photos look more peaceful and vivid.

제안: Cần viết câu mạch lạc và chính xác: nêu rõ sở thích (own country / other countries) và giải thích cụ thể. Tránh câu vụn vặt; dùng 1 chủ đề + 1–2 câu hỗ trợ, liền mạch bằng liên từ (for example, because).

예시: I prefer the views in my own country, especially the countryside, because they feel peaceful and familiar. For example, I can visit small villages near my hometown to relax and take photos of traditional scenes.

× I like talking pictures.

✓ I like taking pictures.

Student used the wrong verb 'talking' instead of the correct phrasal verb 'taking pictures'. Use 'take pictures' to mean photographing. Sửa thành 'taking' để diễn đạt hành động chụp ảnh chính xác. Suggestions: practice common verb collocations like 'take pictures', 'make a photo' is less common.

× I refer grills in rural race because of weather or a weather better urban area.

✓ I prefer rural areas because of the weather; it is better than in urban areas.

Original sentence has multiple problems: 'refer' is incorrect verb (should be 'prefer'), 'grills' and 'race' are wrong words; article and noun forms are wrong ('a weather' incorrect). Correct sentence uses 'prefer' + plural 'rural areas' and compares weather between rural and urban areas. Suggestions: use 'prefer' to express preference, use plural for general places ('rural areas'), and construct comparison 'it is better than in urban areas'.

× How many trees? Uh, people?

✓ I like the trees and the people.

These fragments are unclear and lack verbs; likely student intended to mention liking trees and people. The correction provides a complete sentence with definite article 'the' to refer to specific aspects previously mentioned. Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments; include subject and verb to form complete thoughts.

× I refer few in my own countries because I love.

✓ I prefer my own country because I love it here.

Problems: 'refer' should be 'prefer'; 'few' is incorrect and 'countries' should be singular if referring to own country; sentence lacks object for 'love'. Corrected to 'prefer my own country' and adds 'it' as object. Suggestions: use 'prefer' + object, ensure pronoun objects are present ('I love it'), and match singular/plural appropriately.

× Countryside in this space peaceful, for instance.

✓ The countryside here is peaceful, for instance.

Missing verb 'is' and awkward word order. 'This space' is unnatural; 'here' is better. Correction restores subject-verb structure: 'The countryside here is peaceful'. Suggestions: ensure subject + verb + complement order and use natural locative expressions like 'here'.

× I can go to, I can go home.

✓ I can go home.

Sentence repeats the modal expression unnecessarily. Drop the redundant phrase and keep the correct modal + verb structure 'can go home'. Suggestions: avoid repetition; use concise modal constructions.