Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Javobni soddalashtiring va grammatik xatolarga e'tibor bering. Boshlanishda mavzuni aniq ayting (masalan, “Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views.”). Keyin qisqa qoʻshimcha tafsilot bering: qaerda va nima uchun suratga olishni yoqtirishingizni aniqroq tushuntiring. Keraksiz soʻzlar va takrorlardan saqlaning va zamonlarni tuting (I go → I go/when I go; I take → I take).

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I find them interesting. For example, when I travel to a new place, I often take several pictures to capture the scenery and mood. I especially like photographing streets and parks because they show daily life and atmosphere.

제안: Javobni ravshan qilib, aniq afzalliklarni keltiring. Mavzuni birinchi gapda belgilang (I prefer urban areas). Keyin sabablarni bogʻlovchi soʻzlar bilan tushuntiring (for example, because / additionally). Takroriy va keraksiz iboralardan qoching va yagona zamon ishlating.

예시: I prefer taking photos in urban areas because cities offer a variety of interesting spaces, such as busy streets, modern architecture and colourful markets. For example, I enjoy photographing street scenes and nightlife since they show energy and unique details. If I have free time, I visit the city to relax and take pictures.

제안: Aniqroq qilib vataningizni afzalliklarini bayon qiling va grammatikani toʻgʻrilang. Birinchi gapda tanlovni ayting (I prefer views in my own country) va keyin sabablarni taqdim eting (because it is historic, beautiful, has many attractions). Keraksiz takrorlardan qoching va toʻgʻri soʻzlarni ishlating (country is historic, places not please).

예시: I prefer views in my own country because it has a long history and many beautiful places. For instance, there are historic buildings, scenic parks and lively festivals that I like to photograph. I feel more connected to these scenes and know the best spots for good photos.

× Yes, of course I like the taking the pictures of the different ways news because it's very interesting for me and when I when go to the somewhere I take the some different photos.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures of different views because it's very interesting for me, and when I go somewhere I take different photos.

Several article errors and extra words: 'the taking the pictures' should be 'taking pictures' (no definite article); 'the different ways news' is incorrect word choice — 'different views' is appropriate; 'when I when go to the somewhere' has extra 'when' and 'to the' is wrong before 'somewhere'; 'I take the some different photos' should be 'I take different photos' (no article 'the' or 'some' together with 'different'). Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, duplicate words, and choose correct nouns ('views' not 'ways news').

× I prefer taking the photos or taking the photos in the areas because there are many kind of interesting, interesting spaces and entertainment space.

✓ I prefer taking photos in urban areas because there are many kinds of interesting places and entertainment spaces.

Errors: 'taking the photos or taking the photos' is repetitive and 'the' is unnecessary; 'in the areas' should specify which areas ('urban areas'); 'many kind' needs plural 'kinds' and 'interesting, interesting spaces' is repetition; 'entertainment space' should be plural 'entertainment spaces' or 'entertainment venues'. Suggestion: remove repetition, use correct plural forms ('kinds', 'places'), and specify the area type ('urban areas').

× And if I have the time, I go to the, I go to the enjoy myself. I go to the urban cities for enjoying myself and taking some photos.

✓ If I have time, I go to the city to enjoy myself and take some photos.

Problems: unnecessary repetition 'I go to the, I go to the'; 'enjoying myself' should be parallel with 'take' so use base form 'enjoy' and 'take'; 'urban cities' is redundant — 'city' or 'urban areas' is enough; 'have the time' -> 'have time'. Suggestion: simplify sentence, remove repeated fragments, and use parallel verb forms ('enjoy' and 'take').

× I prefer my my own Candice views because my country was very history and very beautiful and my country has many kind of entertainment please and I like to take the pictures from my country.

✓ I prefer my own country's views because my country is very historic and beautiful, and it has many kinds of entertainment places, so I like to take pictures there.

Errors: duplicate 'my my'; 'Candice' is incorrect — likely 'country's'; 'my country was very history' uses wrong tense and word form: use 'is very historic' or 'has a lot of history'; 'many kind' should be 'many kinds'; 'entertainment please' should be 'entertainment places'; 'take the pictures from my country' -> 'take pictures there' or 'of it'. Suggestion: correct possessive form 'country's', use present tense 'is' for general statements, pluralize 'kinds' and 'places', and use appropriate pronoun/place reference.