Views— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
수험생
No, I don't like taking pictures of different views. In fact, I don't really enjoy photography in general.
시험관
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
수험생
I prefer urban views because I grew up in Montevideo, which is the capital city of Uruguay, and I feel comfortable with city life. I enjoy the energy and the convenience of urban areas.
시험관
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
수험생
Although I like views of my own country, I prefer views of foreign countries because I love traveling abroad and known other cultures and cities, so I tend to prioritize that kind of use.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
점수: 68.0제안: Respuesta clara pero demasiado breve. Mejora la naturalidad y la efectividad dando una oración principal seguida de una razón específica y, si es útil, un detalle de apoyo usando conectores simples. Evita repeticiones (por ejemplo “I don't like” y “I don't really enjoy” transmiten lo mismo).
예시: Not really. I don't enjoy photography because I prefer experiencing a scene rather than photographing it; for example, when I travel I like to remember places by sight and memory rather than photos.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
점수: 84.0제안: Buena estructura: respuesta directa y razones claras. Para mejorar, usa un conector de contraste o ejemplo breve y vocabulario más variado (por ejemplo “bustle”, “amenities”, “public transport”) para enriquecer la respuesta sin alargarla demasiado.
예시: I prefer urban views because I grew up in Montevideo and feel comfortable with city life; for instance, I like the bustle, easy access to cafes and public transport, which makes daily life more convenient.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
점수: 76.0제안: Respuesta relevante pero contiene un error gramatical (“known” debería ser “getting to know” o “knowing”) y una frase final confusa (“prioritize that kind of use”). Mejora la claridad y precisión gramatical usando un conector claro y un ejemplo concreto. Mantén la respuesta dentro de 3–4 oraciones como máximo.
예시: I prefer views of other countries because I love traveling and getting to know new cultures and cities; for example, seeing unfamiliar architecture and street life helps me learn about different ways of living.
문법
× I prefer views of foreign countries because I love traveling abroad and known other cultures and cities, so I tend to prioritize that kind of use.
✓ I prefer views of foreign countries because I love traveling abroad and getting to know other cultures and cities, so I tend to prioritize that kind of view.
The original sentence uses 'known' where the correct form is the verb phrase 'get to know' (present infinitive or gerund form) to express the action of becoming familiar with cultures. 'Known' is a past participle and does not work without an appropriate auxiliary (for example, 'have known') and would change the meaning. Also, 'use' at the end is incorrect in context; 'view' matches the noun used earlier. Suggestion: use 'getting to know' or 'to get to know' to convey the action; keep 'view' instead of 'use' for consistency.'
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