Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体自然且信息充实，但有几处可以改进：1) 避免重复（如“special moments and beautiful sceneries”有些冗余），2) 语法和搭配稍作调整（例如“beautiful sceneries”应为“beautiful scenery”或“scenic views”；“the editing skills”可改为“editing skills”），3) 控制句子数量不超过5句并使用连接词使表达更连贯。可以把重点放在一两个具体例子上，展示细节（拍摄主题、场景或使用的技巧）。

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it lets me capture memorable scenes. For example, I often shoot coastal landscapes at golden hour to practice composition and light, and I later edit the photos to enhance colors before sharing them with friends.

제안: 回答表达清楚，有具体理由和例子，但存在语法、小错误和重复词（如“than than noisy city”），部分搭配不自然（“they are more open spaces and fresher”建议改为“they offer more open space and fresher air”）。建议用一两个连接词（e.g., because, for example）保持逻辑，同时把句子精简以避免冗长。

예시: I prefer rural views because they offer more open space and fresher air, which helps me relax after work. For example, I often walk among trees and listen to birds, a peaceful experience compared with the noisy city.

제안: 回答意思大致明确，但表达存在多处问题：1) 用词不当（“strange architectures”听起来有贬义且语法不自然，建议用“distinctive architecture”或“unique features”），2) 句子结构和逻辑不够紧密（“So let's broaden my perspective”主语不明且口语化），3) 可提供更具体的比较或例子来支撑观点。建议改为一到两句，先给出直接回答，再用具体例子或原因拓展。

예시: I don't mind whether the views are at home or abroad because every country has its own distinctive architecture and landscapes. For example, I love comparing traditional villages in my country with historic buildings I photographed during travels abroad, which always broadens my perspective.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture special moments and beautiful sceneries.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture special moments and beautiful scenery.

原句中主句主语是复数“pictures”，而从句用的是单数代词“it”，产生代词与先行词不一致的问题（属于动名词/代词搭配的错误，归类为动词+ -ing 形式相关的问题因为“taking”是重点动作）。此外，中文表达中“sceneries”通常用不可数名词“scenery”。建议：保持代词与先行词数一致（用“they”指代“pictures”），并使用不可数名词“scenery”。

× I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes so I can preserve memories and share them with my friends.

✓ I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes so I can preserve memories and share them with my friends.

此句语法正确。动名词/动词形式使用恰当，无需修改。保持原句即可。

× And sometimes I use these photos to practice my composition and the editing skills.

✓ Sometimes I use these photos to practice my composition and editing skills.

原句中开头使用连词“And”不必要，可删去使句子更自然。此外“the editing skills”中定冠词“the”不合适且“skills”前不需冠词。此处为动词+ -ing 场景下的名词搭配问题，建议删除多余冠词并调整词序。

× I prefer views in rural areas because they are more open spaces and fresher, which help me unwind after a long day of work.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are more open and fresher, which helps me unwind after a long day of work.

原句中“they are more open spaces”中“they”指代“views”，不能跟“spaces”并列；应直接说“more open”。另外关系从句“which help me”中的先行词是单数/整体“which”指代前面的情况或环境，习惯上用单数动词“helps”。建议：去掉名词重复，统一主谓数一致。

× For example, I enjoy taking walks among trees and listening to birds, which feels much more peaceful than than noisy city.

✓ For example, I enjoy taking walks among trees and listening to birds, which feels much more peaceful than the noisy city.

原句有两处问题：一是重复写了“than than”；二是比较结构中缺少定冠词“the”来限定“noisy city”。从句“which feels”指代前面的整体感觉，使用单数“feels”是可以的。建议去掉重复词并在“noisy city”前加“the”。

× I enjoy landscapes in all the countries because all the countries have strange architectures in the unique features.

✓ I enjoy landscapes in all countries because each country has unique architectural features.

原句时态虽为一般现在，但表述不自然且有复数与不可数搭配问题。“all the countries”重复且冗余，应该简化为“all countries”或用“each country”来强调个别差异。“strange architectures”用法不当，应改为“unique architectural features”或“unique architecture”。建议使用“each country has unique architectural features”更自然、语法正确。

× So let's broaden my perspective.

✓ So it broadens my perspective.

原句“So let's broaden my perspective.”在语境中不恰当，因为说话者并非在建议听者“让我们一起做某事”。更自然的表达应说明拍摄不同国家的风景“帮我开阔视野”，因此改为“It broadens my perspective.”或“Doing so broadens my perspective.” 建议根据语境用陈述句表达结果，而不是祈使句。