Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant with good vocabulary (e.g. "scenic views", "golden hour"). To improve further, make the response slightly more concise and add one specific example or a short reason to make it more engaging. Use a linking phrase to connect ideas and avoid repeating words like "love" twice.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different scenic views such as beaches, rivers and mountains. For instance, I often shoot during the golden hour because the warm orange and yellow light creates dramatic shadows and vivid colours that look great in photos.

제안: Good direct answer and relevant details. To improve, replace vague words like "etcetera" with a concrete detail, and use a linking word to expand your point (e.g. "because" or "for example"). Add a short specific example of a scene you enjoy photographing.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they feel peaceful and have vibrant natural colours. For example, I enjoy photographing green fields at dawn when birds are active and the light highlights the dewy grass.

제안: Strong, well-structured answer with clear reasons and examples. To improve, streamline phrases (avoid "almost everything") and be specific about locations or times to support your preference. Use a linking word like "for example" only once and ensure sentence length stays within the 3–4 sentence limit.

예시: I prefer photographing views in my own country because India offers great variety, from lush forests and beaches to high mountains and wide rivers. For example, I often photograph beach sunsets for their colourful skies and misty mountain hills at dawn to capture atmospheric layers.

× I love to take pictures of different scenic views such as beaches, rivers and mountains.

✓ I love taking pictures of different scenic views such as beaches, rivers and mountains.

Using 'love' with a verb can take either the infinitive or the -ing form, but in conversational descriptions of hobbies the -ing form is more natural and consistent with following sentences that use gerunds (e.g. 'I usually take shots'). Replace 'to take' with 'taking' for natural collocation and stylistic consistency.

× I usually take shots of golden hour when the sky is orange and yellow, which I love the most.

✓ I usually take shots at golden hour when the sky is orange and yellow, which I love the most.

The fixed expression is 'at golden hour' (or 'during the golden hour'), not 'of golden hour'. Also 'which I love the most' is acceptable but slightly redundant; keeping it is fine. Change the preposition to 'at' to match the idiomatic phrase.

× I love taking pictures of rural areas as they offer very peaceful and vibrant colours of nature such as birds, animals, greenfields etcetera.

✓ I love taking pictures of rural areas as they offer very peaceful and vibrant colours of nature such as birds, animals and green fields.

Use 'and' before the final item in a list instead of 'etcetera' for clarity in a short enumerations. Also 'green fields' should be two words. Avoid 'etcetera' in spoken/detail sentences; explicitly list or end the list.

× I prefer taking pictures in my own country because India is a tropical country that offers almost everything from lush forest and beautiful beaches to high mountains and long rivers.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in my own country because India is a tropical country that offers almost everything from lush forests and beautiful beaches to high mountains and long rivers.

When listing 'lush forest' with 'almost everything from...to...' the plural 'forests' is appropriate to match 'beaches, mountains, rivers' which are plural. Use consistent pluralization for parallel items.

× For example, I love photographing the sunset of the beaches and the misty hills in the mountain.

✓ For example, I love photographing the sunsets on the beaches and the misty hills in the mountains.

Use plural 'sunsets' to match general habit and 'on the beaches' is the idiomatic preposition for photographing a sunset at a beach. Also 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to match general reference to ranges or many hills; 'in the mountains' is the correct phrase. These changes make the sentence grammatically and idiomatically correct.