Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and uses incorrect phrasing (‘alike’ is not appropriate). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make it coherent. Keep answers natural and avoid single-word replies.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me relax and remember places. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes when I travel because the light and colors change quickly.

제안: The response answers directly but is brief and slightly informal. Expand with a supporting detail and a linking phrase to explain why you prefer rural/nature views. Include a specific example or comparison to make the answer more informative and natural.

예시: I prefer views in rural and natural areas because I like open spaces and greenery. For instance, I enjoy hiking in the countryside where I can photograph mountains and lakes, which is more peaceful than crowded city streets.

제안: The answer is understandable but redundant (‘other foreign’ is repetitive). Provide a brief reason and, if possible, a specific example of a foreign view you like. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to expand coherently.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because travelling lets me see different landscapes and cultures. For example, I loved the coastal scenery in Portugal last year, which was very different from the beaches at home.

× Yes, alike.

✓ Yes, I do.

The student used 'alike' incorrectly. 'Alike' means 'similar' and is not an appropriate standalone response to 'Do you like...?' A short affirmative reply to a yes/no question requires an auxiliary verb: 'Yes, I do.' Suggestion: use 'Yes, I do' or simply 'Yes.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I prefer nature areas.

✓ I prefer natural areas.

'Nature' is a noun; when modifying 'areas' an adjective is required. 'Natural' is the correct adjective form. Suggestion: use 'natural areas' or 'natural settings.' Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I prefer views in other foreign countries.

✓ I prefer views in foreign countries.

'Other' and 'foreign' together are redundant here. If the contrast is with 'my own country,' simply 'foreign countries' is sufficient. Remove 'other.' Suggestion: say 'in foreign countries' or 'in other countries' (but not both). Grammar problem type ID: 13