Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用更自然和简洁的表达来回答，注意语法（冠词、时态和单复数）以及避免冗长。可以先直接回答问题，再用一两句具体细节支持，比如拍摄主题或常用器材。

예시: Yes, I do. I’ve enjoyed photography since high school and practice regularly—mostly shooting landscapes and cityscapes. Over the past seven years I’ve learned to control lighting and composition, often using a tripod and a 35mm lens to get sharp, well‑framed shots.

제안: 回答要直接表明偏好并给出清晰理由。注意语法（时态一致、主谓一致和词汇搭配），以及用更恰当的词汇描述夜景和交通。避免不清楚的短语如“better wheels”。

예시: I prefer urban views. I grew up in cities, so I enjoy the vibrant night scenes, varied architecture and easy public transport. Cities offer more interesting lights and buildings to photograph than rural areas.

제안: 先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持。纠正不自然或模糊的表达（如“can't be the judge”、“wheels”），用更准确的词汇说明喜欢本国风景的原因并给出例子。

예시: I prefer views in my own country for now, because I haven’t traveled abroad. My country has diverse landscapes—from coastal cliffs to mountain ranges—so I can find a wide variety of scenery to photograph without leaving home.

× I am a bit of photographer myself and I started taking pictures when I was in high school.

✓ I am a bit of a photographer myself, and I started taking pictures when I was in high school.

原句缺少不定冠词“a”。在英语中，表示某人的职业或身份时通常需要在可数名词前加不定冠词。建议在“a bit of”和“photographer”之间加上“a”，并在复合句中在两个独立分句间加逗号。

× It took me 7 years to have a fully understanding of the lighting and the composition.

✓ It took me 7 years to have a full understanding of lighting and composition.

原句中“fully understanding”用法不当。此处需要名词短语“a full understanding”（形容词+名词），而不是副词+动名词结构；且“the lighting and the composition”中可省略定冠词以更自然，故改为“lighting and composition”。

× Actually, I spend most of my time in cities when I was growing up and especially when I in high school and in college.

✓ Actually, I spent most of my time in cities when I was growing up, especially when I was in high school and in college.

原句时态不一致。“when I was growing up”与“spend”应统一为过去时，故“spend”改为过去式“spent”。另外短语“when I in high school”缺少动词“was”，需改为“when I was in high school”。建议保持时态一致并补全动词。

× The city has its better transportation and better wheels at night while the rural areas don't have.

✓ The city has better transportation and better nightlife, while the rural areas don't.

原句使用“its better transportation”表达重复且不自然，且“wheels”用法错误（应为“nightlife”或“walking/wheel”都不符合原意）。此处应省略“its”并用“better transportation and better nightlife”。同时“the rural areas don't have”后需完整成分，可直接与前半句比较。

× I have never been to another country since I was born, so I can't be the judge of that.

✓ I have never been to another country since I was born, so I can't be the judge of that.

此句语法正确，但需注意语义：使用现在完成时“have never been”与“since I was born”搭配正确，因此无需修改。这里提供解释：现在完成时表示到现在仍未发生的经历，符合语境。

× However, I can say that my country has its various landscape throughout the whole states, so I enjoy my country's own wheels.

✓ However, I can say that my country has various landscapes throughout the country, so I enjoy my country's scenery.

原句中“its various landscape”在数量和搭配上不当，应改为可数复数“various landscapes”。“throughout the whole states”表达不自然，改为“throughout the country”。最后“wheels”用法完全不恰当，语境应为“scenery”（风景）。建议使用固定搭配“various landscapes”与“enjoy the scenery”。