Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with word choice and grammar, and make your answer more natural and slightly longer (1–3 sentences). Use correct verbs (prefer, see) and explain reason with a linking word. For example, say you prefer experiencing scenery in person and mention a brief reason (e.g., atmosphere, details, memories).

예시: I don’t really like taking pictures of every view; I prefer to experience the scenery with my own eyes because the atmosphere and details feel more vivid. Also, I find that putting my phone away helps me remember the moment better.

제안: This answer is confusing and contains grammar errors. First state your preference clearly (rural or urban). Then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, although). Ensure consistency: if you prefer rural, explain features of rural areas; if urban, explain features of cities. Fix verb forms and use plural/singular correctly.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy open landscapes and quiet countryside life. For example, I like seeing rice fields and small villages, which feel peaceful compared with the crowded streets and tall buildings in cities.

제안: Improve grammar (use 'prefer' and correct verb forms), avoid repetition, and add a linking phrase to expand slightly. Be specific about which landscapes or cultural features you like, and give a short reason why they appeal to you.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because it has beautiful mountain ranges and traditional farming villages that I find charming. For instance, I love watching farmers work in terraced fields and seeing the changing colors of the mountains throughout the year.

× No, because I refer to see those sceneries with my own eyes rather than see them on my phone.

✓ No, because I prefer to see those scenes with my own eyes rather than see them on my phone.

The student used 'refer to' incorrectly. The appropriate verb is 'prefer' (choice/liking) and after 'prefer' we can use 'prefer to do' or 'prefer doing'. Also 'sceneries' is nonstandard; use 'scenes' or 'landscapes'. Suggestion: use 'I prefer to see' or 'I prefer seeing'. Relevant grammar problem type: Verb + -ing form (use of correct verb form after prefer).

× Well, I refer views in rural areas because I enjoy watching tall buildings and it also reflect the busy lifestyle of the citizens live in there.

✓ Well, I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy watching open landscapes, and they also reflect the busy lifestyle of the citizens who live there.

Errors: 'refer views' is incorrect — should be 'prefer views' or 'prefer the views'; 'enjoy watching tall buildings' conflicts with rural preference so 'open landscapes' fits; subject-verb agreement 'it also reflect' is wrong (plural subject needs 'reflect'); 'citizens live in there' needs a relative pronoun and no extra preposition: 'citizens who live there'. Suggestions: use 'prefer', ensure subject-verb agreement, and include 'who' for relative clause. Relevant grammar problem type: Verb + -ing form (use of correct verb after prefer) and subject-verb agreement handled in correction.

× I prefer views in my country because I enjoy watching beautiful landscapes and besides I also loves to see high mountains and farmer lifestyle in my country.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I enjoy looking at beautiful landscapes, and I also love to see high mountains and the farming lifestyle there.

'I also loves' is incorrect for first person singular; correct form is 'I also love' (no -s). 'Watching beautiful landscapes' is better phrased as 'looking at beautiful landscapes'. 'Farmer lifestyle' is unnatural; use 'farming lifestyle' or 'farmers' way of life'. Also remove redundant 'in my country' at end by using 'there'. Suggestion: use correct third-person verb forms and natural collocations: 'I love', 'look at', 'farming lifestyle'. Relevant grammar problem type: Third person singular issue.