Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, then give one specific reason and one brief detail. Avoid grammatical errors (e.g., articles, verb forms) and redundant phrases. Use linking words like "because" to connect ideas and keep the response within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes — I enjoy photographing different views, especially in cities and the countryside. I recently bought an iPhone 7 Pro Max because its camera features help me capture high-quality shots. For example, the wide-angle lens is great for landscapes, and the portrait mode works well for people.

제안: Answer directly and avoid contradicting statements. Use one clear topic sentence (state your preference), then support with specific reasons and a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example"). Correct grammar (plural/singular agreement) and reduce repetition to stay within the allowed sentence limit.

예시: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and visually appealing. For example, the open fields, clear skies, and greenery create picturesque scenes that are ideal for landscape photos.

제안: Be specific and concise. State your preference clearly (both is acceptable) then give a concrete example or brief reason why. Avoid vague phrases, unnecessary self-descriptions, and incomplete sentences. Use correct noun forms and complete your final thought.

예시: I like views in both my country and abroad because each offers unique scenes. For example, I enjoyed cityscapes in Singapore and natural landscapes at home, so I take photos of architecture and nature depending on what I find interesting.

× Yes, definitely I like to take a pictures of different views special in urban and rural areas.

✓ Yes, definitely I like to take pictures of different views, especially in urban and rural areas.

The noun 'pictures' should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Also 'special' is the wrong word form; use the adverb 'especially' to modify the phrase. Suggestion: remove 'a' before the plural noun and replace 'special' with 'especially' to show emphasis.

× That's why recently buying iPhone 7 Pro Max so that I can take a very good picture for the good regulations, features and everything.

✓ That's why I recently bought an iPhone 7 Pro Max so that I can take very good pictures because of its features and settings.

The original uses the present participle 'buying' where the past tense 'bought' is required to indicate a completed action. Also 'a iPhone' should be 'an iPhone' and 'picture' should be plural to match general meaning. 'Regulations' is incorrect in this context; 'features' or 'settings' is appropriate. Suggestion: use past tense 'bought', use the appropriate article 'an', pluralize 'pictures' and replace 'regulations' with 'features' or 'settings'.

× Honestly, I prefer both, but most of the time as I'm living in urban areas, I'm not that much interested in urban areas.

✓ Honestly, I prefer both, but since I live in urban areas most of the time, I'm not that interested in urban views.

Use 'I live' (simple present) instead of 'I'm living' for a habitual situation. 'Not that much interested' is informal and awkward; 'not that interested' or 'not very interested' is natural. Also 'urban areas' repeated; clarify as 'urban views'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and streamline phrasing.

× I'm interested in rural areas, really.

✓ I'm really interested in rural areas.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but word order is more natural with 'really' before 'interested'. No plural/singular error now; adjusted for natural emphasis.

× Rural areas is really peaceful and the weather, the skies, the green colors, everything seems very beautiful and it's really picturesque.

✓ Rural areas are really peaceful, and the weather, skies and greenery all seem very beautiful; it's really picturesque.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Rural areas' is plural and requires 'are' not 'is'. Also 'green colors' is unnatural; use 'greenery'. Use commas and conjunctions to clarify the list. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and choose natural collocations like 'greenery'.

× Honestly both because I also visit some other countries like Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand and also love my country to take pictures with.

✓ Honestly, both, because I have also visited other countries like Malaysia, Singapore and Thailand, and I also love taking pictures in my own country.

Tense and aspect: 'visit' should be past/present perfect if referring to past visits; use 'have visited'. 'Love my country to take pictures with' is ungrammatical; use 'love taking pictures in my own country'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use present perfect for past experiences and correct the verb pattern to 'love taking'.

× So I'm a pictures friendly person.

✓ So I'm a picture-friendly person.

'a pictures friendly' is incorrect: 'pictures' should be singular in the compound adjective 'picture-friendly' and hyphenated. Also 'a picture-friendly person' is the correct article usage. Suggestion: form compound adjectives correctly and use singular noun in that compound.

× I like to take selfies different kind of pictures not only with me but also the nature's pictures and I also love to take pictures with the.

✓ I like to take selfies and different kinds of pictures, not only of myself but also of nature, and I also love to take pictures with others.

Several issues: 'different kind of pictures' needs plural 'kinds' and the preposition 'of' to indicate object ('pictures of myself'). 'the nature's pictures' is incorrect possessive; use 'pictures of nature'. The final fragment 'take pictures with the.' is incomplete; likely intended 'with others'. Also prefer gerund forms consistently: 'like taking' or keep 'like to take' but correct objects and prepositions. Suggestion: use 'different kinds of', 'pictures of', and complete the sentence by specifying 'others' if intended.