Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Жоопни аниқ ва содда қилиб айт. Биринчи жумласида тўғридан-тўғри жавоб бер ва сўнгра 1–2 та аниқ сабаб ёки мисол қўш. Тегишли ўткирлик сўзларидан (for example, because, so) фойдалан ва тавсияларга кўпроқ конкрет детал қўш: қандай ҳис-салотлар уйғонади, қайси жиҳатларини ёқтирсан, ва бу суратлардан кейин нимани ёдга оласан. Товундаги “uh” каби тўхтамлар камайтир. (Answerni aniq va sodda qil. Birinchi jumlada to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri javob ber va so‘ngra 1–2 ta aniq sabab yoki misol qo‘sh. Tegishli o‘tish so‘zlaridan (for example, because, so) foydalan va tavsiyalarga ko‘proq konkret detal qo‘sh: qanday his-salotlar uyg‘onadi, qaysi jihatlarini yoqtirasan, va bu suratlardan keyin nimani yodga olasan. Tovundagi “uh” kabi to‘xtatmalar kamaytir.)

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different places because each view evokes a unique feeling and atmosphere. For example, coastal scenes make me feel calm and reflective, while mountain views energize me. So, taking photos helps me remember those emotions long after I leave.

제안: Жавобни қисқа ва тузук қилиб туз: аввал тўғридан-тўғри танловни айтиб ўт, сўнгра 1–2 та аниқ ва тўлиқ сабаб келтир. Риторик саволлардан ва нотўғри грамматик тузилмалардан қоч. Уйғунлик учун боғловчи сўзлар (because, therefore, moreover) қўш. (Javobni qisqa va tuzuk qilib tuz: avval to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri tanlovni aytib o‘t, so‘ngra 1–2 ta aniq va to‘liq sabab keltir. Ritоrik savollardan va noto‘g‘ri grammatik tuzilmalarдан qoch. Uyqunlik uchun bog‘lovchi so‘zlar (because, therefore, moreover) qo‘sh.)

예시: I prefer rural areas because they offer peace and natural scenery that helps me relax. For example, fields and forests reduce noise and let me breathe fresh air, so I can forget city stress and enjoy simple conversations with locals.

제안: Жавобни тўғридан-тўғри ва логик тартибда бер. Биринчи жумласида танловни аниқ қил, кейин сабабини қисқача ва аниқ мисол билан тушунтир. Интернет ҳақидаги фикрни очиқ ва тузук ифодалан ва эсдан чиқарманг — сўров-суҳбат (question back to examiner) қўшмаслик керак. (Javobni to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri va logik tartibda ber. Birinchi jumlada tanlovni aniq qil, keyin sababini qisqacha va aniq misol bilan tushuntir. Internet haqidagi fikrni ochiq va tuzuk ifodalan va esdan chiqarmang — so‘rov-suhbat (question back to examiner) qo‘shmaslik kerak.)

예시: I prefer views in other countries because discovering unfamiliar landscapes is exciting and inspiring. For instance, seeing images of Iceland’s glaciers online made me want to experience them in person, so I can appreciate the scenery and culture firsthand.

× Well, that's an interesting question. Yes, I do because taking pictures different place gives me different feeling and also, uh, other atmosphere.

✓ Well, that's an interesting question. Yes, I do because taking pictures of different places gives me different feelings and also a different atmosphere.

The errors involve missing preposition 'of' and singular/plural forms. Use 'taking pictures of different places' (preposition required). Use plural 'places' and 'feelings' to match 'different'. Use 'a different atmosphere' to form a correct noun phrase. Suggestion: always include 'of' after 'pictures' and ensure nouns agree in number.

× What can I feel and remind that view when I leave that place?

✓ What can I feel and remember about that view when I leave that place?

The verb 'remind' is incorrect; use 'remember' to express recalling. Also add preposition 'about' after 'remember' for the object 'that view'. Ensure verb choice matches intended meaning. Suggestion: choose correct verb ('remember') and include appropriate preposition.

× Well that's significant moment for me. I prefer rural areas because it's gives me uh moods and helps me take a break from city life and enjoy the atmosphere.

✓ Well, that's a significant moment for me. I prefer rural areas because they give me moods and help me take a break from city life and enjoy the atmosphere.

Missing article 'a' before 'significant moment'. 'Rural areas' is plural so use plural verb 'give' and 'help' not 'gives'/'helps'. Also 'it' cannot refer to plural 'areas'; use 'they'. Suggestion: add articles where needed and ensure subject-verb agreement with plural subjects.

× Also communicate with other people and feel nature.

✓ I also communicate with other people and feel close to nature.

The original sentence lacks a subject 'I' and needs clearer verb-object structure. 'Feel nature' is unnatural; use 'feel close to nature' or 'feel connected to nature'. Suggestion: include subject and use idiomatic expressions for feeling nature.

× Speaking honestly, I prefer views in other countries because when you don't know other things and just save them only on Internet, you feel like unknown and you want to see them and enjoy that nature.

✓ Speaking honestly, I prefer views in other countries because when you only know things from the Internet, they feel unfamiliar, and you want to see them in person and enjoy the nature.

Tense and phrasing issues: 'don't know other things and just save them only on Internet' is awkward. Use present simple 'only know things from the Internet'. 'Feel like unknown' is incorrect; use 'they feel unfamiliar'. 'See them and enjoy that nature' should be 'see them in person and enjoy the nature'. Suggestion: simplify and use idiomatic expressions.

× What did you have did you see on Internet?

✓ What did you see on the Internet?

Redundant auxiliary verbs cause ungrammatical structure. Use single past auxiliary 'did' plus base verb 'see'. Also include article 'the' before 'Internet'. Suggestion: form past questions as 'What did you see...?' and use 'the Internet'.