Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition (e.g., “let us let me”) and use correct noun forms and articles.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help me preserve memories. For example, when I visit a park I often photograph the lake at sunset so I can remember the colors and atmosphere later.

제안: Answer the question directly and fix vocabulary mistakes (‘meals’ → ‘views’). Give a clear preference with a specific reason and one brief supporting detail using a linking word like ‘because’ or ‘so’.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because the greenery and flowers make me feel relaxed. For instance, walking through a countryside trail calms me and lets me take better landscape photos.

제안: Be grammatically correct and more specific. State your preference clearly, correct verb agreement and comparative phrasing (‘than other countries’). Add a concrete example of a local view and why it is special.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because many local landmarks reflect our culture and styles. For example, the traditional mountain villages near my hometown have unique architecture and festivals that I don't see elsewhere.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different views because taking picture can let us let me have a memorable memory and I can see the memory.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because taking pictures can give me memorable moments and let me recall them.

Use plural 'pictures' because 'taking pictures' refers generally to multiple instances (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Let us let me' is ungrammatical and redundant; replace with 'give me' to express obtaining memories. 'Memorable memory' is repetitive; use 'memorable moments' or 'memories'. Also use 'let me recall them' to clearly express being able to see/remember those moments.

× I prefer meals in rural areas because when I see many plants and flowers I will feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because when I see many plants and flowers I feel relaxed and comfortable.

The student wrote 'meals' which is an incorrect word choice for the context; it should be 'views' (Grammar Problem Type 13). Also 'I will feel' is acceptable but present simple 'I feel' is more natural when stating general preferences and habitual reactions (Grammar Problem Type 6).

× I prefer views in my own country because in my country it have many cultural views and it's very beautiful and unique. Than others country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country has many cultural attractions, and it is very beautiful and unique compared to other countries.

Multiple issues: 'it have' is subject-verb agreement error but primarily singular/plural wording and agreement (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 27); correct verb is 'has'. 'Cultural views' is awkward; use 'cultural attractions' or 'cultural sights' (Grammar Problem Type 13). 'Than others country' is incorrect comparative phrasing; use 'compared to other countries' and ensure plural 'countries' (Grammar Problem Type 19 and 1). Also expand contractions to 'it is' for clarity.