Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repeated hesitations and incorrect phrases (e.g., “not a good looking people” → “not photogenic”). Keep it under 4–5 sentences.

예시: No, I don't really like taking pictures of views. I'm quite shy in front of the camera and I don't feel photogenic, so I usually prefer to enjoy the scene without photographing it. However, if a view is especially beautiful, I might take one quick photo to remember it.

제안: Answer the question directly with a clear preference and give one or two specific reasons, using linking words (e.g., “because”, “however”). Don’t ask to repeat unless you genuinely didn’t hear; try to respond promptly. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer rural views because I enjoy quiet landscapes and open space, which help me relax. For example, I like walking by lakes and fields rather than busy city streets. However, I do appreciate city skylines when I visit for a short time.

제안: Begin with a clear statement of your preference or say it's difficult to choose, then support it with specific comparisons and examples. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I have lived in Canada for almost one year”, “in Canada people are more friendly”). Use linking words like “however” or “for example” to structure the answer and limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: It's hard to choose, but I tend to prefer views in Canada. I have lived in Canada for almost one year and I find people here, especially in Manitoba, to be friendlier, which makes visiting parks and neighbourhoods more pleasant. However, I also appreciate China's cultural landmarks and scenery when I go back.

× I think I'm not a good looking people and I'm very shy and I'm not, I'm not like take pictures, yeah.

✓ I don't think I'm good-looking and I'm very shy, so I don't like taking pictures.

The original uses the plural noun 'people' incorrectly to refer to a single person (use 'person' or rephrase). Also 'I'm not like take pictures' is ungrammatical: 'like' should be followed by a gerund ('taking') when expressing preference. Combine ideas into a clear sentence: use 'I don't think I'm good-looking' (correct singular reference) and 'I don't like taking pictures' (correct verb + -ing form). Use a hyphen in 'good-looking' as a compound adjective.

× I used to live in China, it's my country and I have moved to Canada for almost one years.

✓ I used to live in China; it's my country, and I have moved to Canada for almost one year.

The phrase 'almost one years' mixes singular/plural; for approximately one year use 'almost one year' (singular). 'I have moved to Canada' is acceptable but more natural is 'I moved to Canada' or 'I have moved to Canada' depending on context. Keep tenses consistent: 'used to live' (past habit) and 'I have moved' (present perfect) can both be used, but correct the plural error and punctuation. Alternatively, 'I moved to Canada almost a year ago' is clearer.

× It's difficult to compare which country is better, but I think in the Canada other people are more friendly, especially in Manitoba.

✓ It's difficult to say which country is better, but I think people in Canada are friendlier, especially in Manitoba.

Do not use the definite article 'the' with country names like Canada (article error). The original word order 'in the Canada other people are more friendly' is awkward; the natural order is 'people in Canada are friendlier.' Also use comparative 'friendlier' (or 'more friendly') and prefer 'say which country is better' over 'compare which country is better.'