Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сфокусируйтесь на чёткой структуре ответа: начните с краткого утверждения, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные детали. Уберите повторения и исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, использование инфинитива и согласование подлежащего/сказуемого). Практикуйте замены словосочетаний («take photos of nature/animals», «capture memories», «find it relaxing»).

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because it helps me capture memories and relax. For example, I often photograph animals and natural landscapes when I visit parks or the countryside.

제안: Отвечайте прямо и логично: назовите предпочтение в первом предложении, затем объясните конкретные причины (удобства, атмосфера, примеры). Избегайте неправильных слов и повторений; используйте подходящие слова («urban/rural», «town», «village», «more people», «shops»).

예시: I prefer urban views because cities have more amenities and lively streets. For instance, I like walking past shops and markets in town where there are plenty of people and things to see.

제안: Давайте чёткий ответ в первом предложении, затем приведите конкретные причины и один пример. Избегайте ошибок в грамматике (напр., «I prefer», «my country is», «there are») и повторяющихся фраз. Употребляйте описательные прилагательные и уточнения («diverse landscapes», «friendly people»).

예시: I prefer views in my own country because it has very diverse landscapes and many friendly people. For example, there are vast natural areas like mountains and forests that I enjoy visiting.

× Absolutely, I like I like take photos, memories and some are relaxing and I take she take take animals and and beautiful nature.

✓ Absolutely, I like to take photos of memories, relaxing scenes, animals, and beautiful nature.

Multiple issues: incorrect verb form 'take' should be the infinitive 'to take' after 'like' (use of verb form rule). Repetition and extra words cause sentence structure errors and unclear listing. Use 'photos of' to show what the photos are of and separate items with commas. Remove duplicated words and incorrect phrase 'I take she take take' which has pronoun and verb errors. Suggestion: after 'I like' use 'to' + base verb or the gerund consistently (e.g., 'I like taking photos').

× I prefer regularities because they are more people and and supermarket.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there are fewer people and more supermarkets.

The original has wrong word 'regularities' and wrong pronoun and quantifier usage. 'Rural areas' is likely intended. Use 'there are' for existence (There be issue, but primary error is word choice). Also 'more people and and supermarket' is ungrammatical: count nouns need plural 'supermarkets' and 'fewer people' is appropriate for rural areas. Suggestion: use correct noun 'rural areas', use 'there are' for existence, and match singular/plural forms.

× Supermarkets in small town.

✓ There are supermarkets in small towns.

Missing verb 'are' after 'there' (There be issue). Also use plural 'small towns' or 'a small town' with article. Countable noun 'town' requires an article if singular. Suggestion: use 'There are supermarkets in small towns' or 'There is a supermarket in a small town.'

× I probably has my own country because my counter very very big and some more beautiful umm.

✓ I probably prefer my own country because my country is very large and very beautiful.

Incorrect verb 'has' with subject 'I' (should be 'have' if used) and wrong verb choice for 'prefer'. 'Counter' is wrong word; should be 'country'. Missing linking verb 'is' before adjectives 'very large' and 'very beautiful'. Suggestion: use 'I probably prefer my own country because my country is very large and very beautiful.'

× I think my country were in very nature, very nature and some friendly people.

✓ I think my country is very natural and has very friendly people.

Uses 'were' which is past plural; should be 'is' to match singular 'my country' (subject-verb agreement and tense). Phrase 'in very nature' is ungrammatical; 'is very natural' or 'has lots of natural scenery' works. 'Some friendly people' should be 'very friendly people' or 'many friendly people' depending on meaning; ensure quantifier matches. Suggestion: use present tense 'is' and clearer noun phrases such as 'has lots of natural scenery and friendly people.'